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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She used to hug me for no reason except to hold someone she loved always knowing I wasn’t quite there hoping someday I would love her the way she loved me justice comes in a moment of finest irony I stand inside her heart know my guilt know my sentence no defense is offered |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
are you sure you're not ME? sigh, Dunc...just sigh...I KNOW |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The honesty of your words is excellent! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You words always seem to center right there, right here. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She used to hug me for no reason except to hold someone she loved always knowing I wasn't quite there hoping someday I would love her the way she loved me ====================== I stand inside her heart know my guilt know my sentence ====================== the sincerety of this piece has as much impact as the irony.... its always there in your words...between the lines...and on your sleeve... I have said before ....you wear it well. mothyhugs D How long can a girl be haunted by you ... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ouch, this one hurts. I understand the feeling, though it usually goes the other way for me. Hugs Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hung heavy folds thick enough To separate us. ~Hugs to you my friend~ |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Confession is good for the heart .... and the soul. Nicely done, Duncan. Bob |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
flip it around, stand it on its head, then... duck. irony rules my life, i can relate to this on a very intimate, personal level. keep going Duncan, i'm following you.  Chris |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
duncan, your words always leave such an impact on me...and this one is no exception... such a powerful write...pure and honest, based on such tender emotion and yet full of such intensity. you do this so well. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I really like this |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Irony is what makes us stop and take a second look, maybe from a different angle. I hear your heartbeat in this. |
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