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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
tender strings have bound my heart for such a long time will love loosen them Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
absolu.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper I think it will tighten them. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Perhaps... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I think perhaps the strings may entangle you more... |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
strings attached to heart will just make you trip and fall careful...love can hurt  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm.. what Sea said.. I like this. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy this is gorgeous, now I’m going to attempt one, so stand back and give me room, I will probably fall over and I don’t want to hurt anyone when I trip over my lip as it were Bind me with your certainty Strings of love free me Well how is that? Apart from being hard work and all over the place I mean. Your writing however is perfect poetry   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ Than Sy ~ Ya think? Enchantress ~ Maybe? Ron ~ Like ensnaring? SEA ~ love can truly hurt yet one must venture forward else love will be lost Sandra ~ what SEA said was good but you should read what I said your prescription dear Marsha ~ HOORAY! A wonderful, delightful senryu. I loved it  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Puppeteer pulls strings Gently dance upon my heart Stage for your sweet love~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
these soft strings that bind your heart love will then flow through Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ you have set the stage now open your arms for me I will sashay in SK ~ a river runs through love flowing in a torrent current carries me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the pain can be good when it's love that binds your heart tie me with your strings  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ be a masochist there's no need for whips and chains love's pain will suffice |
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