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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-05-20 11:56 PM


(This is for Larry and others that are in need of love and our support right now...)

Inevitable
By: Noah Eaton
5/20/02

When the stars are raining like hail
When the porcelain of the heavens bleach away
When ambitions seem blind, when we can't all be sheep
Hang on, let Jesus let your spirit sleep

When you wait so long for a prayer to be answered
And you ache to feel you can't make it through
When the streets seem quiet and the ocean seems so small
Hang on, a miracle will come

Listen, I can hear Jesus cry
His tears of love falling from the sky
For when one door closes
A new doors opening is inevitable...

May He spread the wings of my heart and help me fly
Let me embrace Him and have all my tears subside
Make a strong heart of the infidel I used to be
Jesus loves you and me...

I was waiting so long in the cornfields of my fate
Making appeasements with the scarecrows that made blockades
Encountering forms to rise above all the shadows
In the wings of a dove

Look up, I can see the sun shine in the sky
And stars of cherubs singing with a tenor so divine
For when one door closes
A new doors opening is inevitable...

May He spread the wings of my heart and help me fly
Let me embrace Him and have all my tears subside
Make a strong heart of the infidel I used to be
Jesus loves you and me...
I can see the sun of a new hope dawning...

May He spread the wings of my heart and help me fly
Let me embrace Him and have all my tears subside
Make a strong heart of the infidel I used to be
Jesus loves you and me...
A new hope is dawning...

Hush, hush, don't say a word
Our time will come...
Hush, hush, don't say a word
Our time will come...
Inevitable as the seasons will change
Inevitable as a children's laughter will refrain
Inevitable as a lovers vow that never fades
Inevitable...
Inevitable...
Inevitable...



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-20-2002 11:59 PM).]

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kaile
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1 posted 2002-05-21 12:18 PM


Noah,

very inspirational and so very true..enjoyed these lines especially

For when one door closes
A new doors opening is inevitable...

now if only i can internalise these lines and commit them to memory...

ethome
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2 posted 2002-05-21 04:54 AM


I have to agree, a deep well meaning poem and a comfort to the reader!
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3 posted 2002-05-21 08:44 AM


Beautiful inspiration that I realy need today. Thanks Noah.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-05-21 09:01 AM



Noah, this is truly from your heart...

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5 posted 2002-05-21 09:11 AM


...Amen...

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6 posted 2002-05-21 09:48 AM


Oh, Noah! This is truly inspired, and inspirational. Bless your sweet heart! ((hug)) Beautiful.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-05-21 10:48 AM


Noah,
I can only add my Amen.

vandana
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8 posted 2002-05-21 11:03 AM


enjoyed
Aimster
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9 posted 2002-05-21 01:58 PM


amen and amen....such a beautiful
write noah and straight from your
heart...im crying...but it's from tears
of happiness...even in our darkest hour
HE is with us...you have such a tender
heart my sweet friend...we all thank you.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Saunni
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10 posted 2002-05-21 11:05 PM


Noah, this is outstanding, My Dear Friend, simply georgous! You always write with so much heart! I look forwarding to reading your work when I can be here! I really love this one!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-05-21 11:47 PM


You are a worthy and sacred friend Noah.
Peace to you too. ThisDiamond

ShadowRider
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12 posted 2002-05-22 10:19 PM


Awwwww Noah....i hear the heartsong in this, and am sure Larry does too.
When dreams fail, there is always another night
to start them again
if God wills it

sometimes, my friend,
your writing is without peer

today, for instance  *sad smiles*
jeff

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13 posted 2002-05-22 11:20 PM


Feels like a heart hug to me..you are such good company and so lending of hope and greatness. Love and hugs for this.

Sincerely,
Regina

Corinne
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14 posted 2002-05-22 11:22 PM


Yours is a generous, caring heart, Noah.

Cor

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15 posted 2002-05-22 11:38 PM


I enjoyed this, Some i can relate, other i cannot... But all in all a great poem for all ... and all should read

The man of few words...

Martie
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16 posted 2002-05-22 11:53 PM


Noah...you have written with heart and a loving spirit.  
CowgirlFreedom17
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17 posted 2002-05-23 01:56 AM


Words can only go so far to describe the feeling and spiritual power in this poem.  I enjoyed it to the root.  Thank you...it's  inspirational.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

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18 posted 2002-05-23 10:04 AM


Oh dear Noah, these words of yours are the most inspirational and uplifting words anyone would ever want or need to hear, well penned, well done...many thanks for sharing your wise, inspirational and uplifting poem here  
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JamesMichael
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19 posted 2002-05-23 02:43 PM


Very nice Noah...James
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20 posted 2002-05-23 03:06 PM


Oh the last stanza was my fave! You still have the talent that made me envious before! So touching.
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