Open Poetry #20 |
With You |
janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
I curl my fingers softly through your hair and gently kiss your lips then close my eyes in breathlessness as my heart does some flips. Then I wrap my arms around you as we press skin to skin and the passion builds like fire as we begin to share the love we’re in. And right here in this moment there's nowhere I'd rather be than laying in your arms Dear with you lovin' me. Your lips ignite a fire deep within as we melt together, and this moment as we make love feels just like forever. Your hands caress me everywhere; your touch electrifies Soft sounds of pleasure meet your ears While deep within my soul the passion flies. And right here in this moment there's nowhere I'd rather be than laying in your arms Dear with you lovin' me. Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the way this poem wrote itself, straight from a passionate heart. |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
This is musical and I'm jealous of your ability to put such experience into words. Very sweet-hot. ~Sydney McLean |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
janmew Wonderful write, enjoyed very much. |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Thanks you all for your kind words. Jan |
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