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janmew
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0 posted 2002-05-19 01:23 AM



I curl my fingers softly through your hair
and gently kiss your lips
then close my eyes in breathlessness
as my heart does some flips.
Then I wrap my arms around you
as we press skin to skin
and the passion builds like fire
as we begin to share the love we’re in.

And right here in this moment
there's nowhere I'd rather be
than laying in your arms Dear
with you lovin' me.

Your lips ignite a fire deep within
as we melt together,
and this moment as we make love
feels just like forever.
Your hands caress me everywhere;
your touch electrifies
Soft sounds of pleasure meet your ears
While deep within my soul the passion flies.

And right here in this moment
there's nowhere I'd rather be
than laying in your arms Dear
with you lovin' me.

Poetry is an expression of feelings.  I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves.

© Copyright 2002 Jan - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-05-19 01:57 AM


I like the way this poem wrote itself, straight from a passionate heart.
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In the Carolina Breeze
2 posted 2002-05-20 09:03 AM


This is musical and I'm jealous of your ability to put such experience into words.  Very sweet-hot.

~Sydney McLean

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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-05-20 09:12 AM


janmew
Wonderful write, enjoyed very much.

janmew
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4 posted 2002-05-23 03:04 PM


Thanks you all for your kind words.

Jan

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