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A Stranger Dance
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A Stranger Dance |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A Stranger Dance Exclamation marks excited her preparation for what eyes might walk her spine it was because of him those words he had slipped beneath her when she had not looked but only felt and which gods should she thank for being alive again as she looked into shared reflections ~ seeing hope freshen ~ [reminded (of self ] images) found in liquid pools raining salt as she laid there rivulets streaming toward temples of gray ~*~ salt-and-pepper shadows nudging memories fingertips rasping voices sulky ~*~ winds blew while rains seeped tangled shadows wrangled silk and satin dreams yet expectation still woke her to wonder if a camel’s hair blush could silk dreams come true she draped drop earrings onto ears that burned, perhaps hoping they would show him inner tension in their dance when he once again slipped those words beneath her her white slink blouse buttons vying for attention her remaining youth… blossoming in this spring dance A stranger dance she had yet to know… |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Riveting |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
To dance with the stranger would be so inviting.... DECA!! You go girl!! You are on a roll! Gawd this is fantastic! ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
does indeed sound as if the change in seasons has brought out in you the things perhaps buried too long inside... a nice piece... I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame Clever, enjoyed. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I like this so much. It feels mysterious, and yet inviting. For some unknown reason it reminded me of a pastlove that I rarely think of. (Funny what words can do to the memories) Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca The desire feel in this is like gasoline...all it needs is a match. Very sultry and lovely images here. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Deca darling girl this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. The passion the depth of this is utterly utterly fabulous, I’m awe-struck by this wonderful piece. The rhythm is absolutely excellent, the presentation is superb and the words in this are utterly utterly beautiful You know I love this don’t you. As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Deca, when one dances a stranger how long would they be strangers til the first song ended or til the morning woke them with sighs you do this so well..makes me jealous of the lucky guy... enjoyed it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she draped drop earrings onto ears that burned, perhaps hoping they would show him inner tension in their dance when he once again slipped those words beneath her her white slink blouse buttons vying for attention her remaining youth blossoming in this spring dance A stranger dance she had yet to know ============================= Its OFFICIALLY SPRING and we are all getting SPRUNG  Ok...you guys REALLY dont play fair... hows a moth supposed to concentrait on taxes with all this smoke?????? very very nice Deca...mmm mmm *library* me thinks me library is a steamy saunna today |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes, I see that you've been expanding. . . I like it. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The temps are rising....NICE...very passionate. Love the images... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Exclamation marks kind of drive the point home don't they? I really enjoyed the way your words danced among the flames, and watching the heat rise!!!!!!!! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-11-2002 09:35 PM).] |
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