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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we made boats with our hands in our pool of touch ocean we floated fingers to person shores and let them run a ground gently touching with our eyes was our sky falling dream place we thought clouds whispers first then damp storms with thunder sounds the sun and night colors were one it didn't matter about time or how far we had to go or where we had been we played like fish people under our surface, we didn't splash we made currents and tides that pushed us together we drowned slowly in our sea of hours ©Dark |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS To drown this way, might not be so bad. As usual your rich visuals ride the top of passion's current. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, yes, yes, may you always down in ecstasy and find Atlantis in each others eyes forever! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
martie , thank you ms, I hope it is a nice way to know the ocean Noah, thanks my friend, I appreciate you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Swimming can be an arduous task. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, thanks my friend..aye it can |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...we made currents and tides... what a wonderful visual... thank you... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Just not enough of them...night Mr. Dark.. enjoyed this deeply. Sincerely, Reg |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A soft drowning... Cor |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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