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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-05-20 08:56 PM



we made boats with our hands
in our pool of touch ocean
we floated fingers to person shores
and let them run a ground gently

touching with our eyes
was our sky falling dream place
we thought clouds whispers first
then damp storms with thunder sounds

the sun and night colors were one
it didn't matter about time
or how far we had to go
or where we had been

we played like fish people under
our surface, we didn't splash
we made currents and tides
that pushed us together

we drowned slowly in our sea of hours

©Dark

© Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-05-20 09:06 PM


DS

To drown this way, might not be so bad.  As usual your rich visuals ride the top of passion's current.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-20 09:41 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, yes, yes, may you always down in ecstasy and find Atlantis in each others eyes forever! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-05-20 09:49 PM


martie , thank you ms, I hope it is a nice way to know the ocean

Noah, thanks my friend, I appreciate you

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-05-20 09:57 PM


Dark Stranger
Swimming can be an arduous task.

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-05-20 10:22 PM


sy, thanks my friend..aye it can
Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-05-20 10:58 PM



...we made currents and tides...

what a wonderful visual...

thank you...

rwood
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7 posted 2002-05-20 11:15 PM


Just not enough of them...night Mr. Dark..
enjoyed this deeply.

Sincerely,
Reg

Corinne
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state of confusion
8 posted 2002-05-21 10:02 AM


A soft drowning...

Cor

vandana
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9 posted 2002-05-21 11:06 AM


liked it
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