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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Once upon a sometime when, I fell in my once again, Falling here and falling there, Ending up in who knows where. In the falling's falderall, I misplaced my wherewithall, Falling, falling, what's in store, On the floor, there's nothing more. So goes the rhythm of the fall, Falling, falling, off the wall, Heeding not of fall's last call, Ever falling free for all. [This message has been edited by Tim (05-20-2002 07:46 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok...where did this little tongue twister come from, hey? Quit staying away so long... and pull out those boxes of poems you haven't shared yet! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tim~ 'Bout time you showed up again~ You leave a *tickle* where you've been ... and that's fine ... but, share some 'roses' with us again ...~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
why not forget the rhyme and do free falling all the time Enjoyed this, Tim! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
In the falling's falderall, I misplaced my wherewithall, Falling, falling, what's in store, On the floor, there's nothing more. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Way cool write Tim! I'm sure you have more to share... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big huggsssssss) Oh Tim, I love to free-fall a lot with my words, sweet friend, I believe when you just can't get a rhyme out without forcing it, that is always the most graceful technique! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
You had me at "Once upon a..." Enjoyed this little ditty much.~Sydney McLean |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
yeah, the Once upon a... It got me too...and this could snarl up a tongue or two or more... Like it! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ok - i'm dizzy now, but i'm glad i ventured into this mixed up montage. Chris |
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