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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-05-20 01:57 PM

This is a repost, for Larry C....I tried to write, but my words could not mutter anything out....Please if you will direct all responses to Larry....

With my deepest Sympathy.....

The Time In Between

And would it be that way?
Angels falling like snowflakes
gently down, to settle
among earth

a formal dance
of softness and wind
shifting skies,
brilliant clouds,
elegantly touching

Would you then hear the silence?
that which
we breathe in delicate
manner, to let these moments
spill their beauty
in a hunger only
the soul can know

Could we feel
in endless light,
grasping lonely time,
reaching beyond
extended whys,
our being trying to comprehend

Do poets chant and swear?
if we feel, do we then
know the magic of starlight,
arriving after dusk?
will it take the path
of a thousand footprints
to understand
the meanings

Go gently then,
embrace the night
continue to fall
in your soft walk
among the earth
You taught the meaning
Of love

Nothing beautiful can stay

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-20-2002 02:13 PM).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-05-20 02:00 PM

Oh this is just so delicate and beautiful and so kind of you to give this to Larry. I, too have tried to write a poem for him, but, I'm at a loss for words right now. Thank you for this.~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-05-20 02:03 PM

................y' put tears in m' eyes, Lauren.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-05-20 02:29 PM

~Remembering Ginger Michelle~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-05-20 02:33 PM

Lauren, your heart is as big as your beautiful eyes...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-20 03:46 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I have nothing to say except this is beautiful and that my thoughts too are with Larry!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-05-20 04:15 PM

Oh this is so perfect for the sad circumstances. I hope Larry feels the love we are all sending him.
Sandra

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-05-20 04:18 PM

Dear, dear Lauren,

========================
Would you then hear the silence?
that which
we breathe in delicate
manner, to let these moments
spill their beauty
in a hunger only
the soul can know
========================

I know how much your darling girls mean to you as my baby meant to me. I understand your inability to create new poetry but this means so much, so very much. Thank you dear friend.

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