Open Poetry #20 |
Feel (for Larry C ) |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is a repost, for Larry C....I tried to write, but my words could not mutter anything out....Please if you will direct all responses to Larry.... With my deepest Sympathy..... The Time In Between And would it be that way? Angels falling like snowflakes gently down, to settle among earth a formal dance of softness and wind shifting skies, brilliant clouds, elegantly touching Would you then hear the silence? that which we breathe in delicate manner, to let these moments spill their beauty in a hunger only the soul can know Could we feel in endless light, grasping lonely time, reaching beyond extended whys, our being trying to comprehend Do poets chant and swear? if we feel, do we then know the magic of starlight, arriving after dusk? will it take the path of a thousand footprints to understand the meanings Go gently then, embrace the night continue to fall in your soft walk among the earth You taught the meaning Of love Nothing beautiful can stay I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-20-2002 02:13 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh this is just so delicate and beautiful and so kind of you to give this to Larry. I, too have tried to write a poem for him, but, I'm at a loss for words right now. Thank you for this.~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
................y' put tears in m' eyes, Lauren. She said burn ... together. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lauren, your heart is as big as your beautiful eyes... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I have nothing to say except this is beautiful and that my thoughts too are with Larry! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh this is so perfect for the sad circumstances. I hope Larry feels the love we are all sending him. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dear, dear Lauren, ======================== Would you then hear the silence? that which we breathe in delicate manner, to let these moments spill their beauty in a hunger only the soul can know ======================== I know how much your darling girls mean to you as my baby meant to me. I understand your inability to create new poetry but this means so much, so very much. Thank you dear friend. |
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