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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-05-20 12:30 PM



If only I could find the words
to comfort you in your sorrow
I would pen them with tenderness
so that I might reach you.

If only I could absorb your pain
and ease your burden
instead I weep uncontrollably
feeling your loss as if it were my own.

Lacking in my attempt to console you
your sadness is felt across the miles
in each and every heart that you've touched
and I want so much to give you something back.

If only I could find the words....

I hope that you know
and can hear my prayers
for the flame burns eternally
lit long ago by our daughter
a special kind of love
that glows in your eyes...

Forever and always
held dear~

© Copyright 2002 BluesSerenade - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2002-05-20 12:33 PM


very poignant write
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-20 12:49 PM


I very much enjoyed this Lori. And I just realized something strange. Not only is your name the same name as my girlfriend BUT both your and my initials are BS!

I'm sure Larry will love this poem. Ah know ah did.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-20-2002 12:50 AM).]

ecrivan
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my own state
3 posted 2002-05-20 12:50 PM


wonderful thoughts and a nice gesture


Larry C
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4 posted 2002-05-20 12:58 PM


Lori,
Your message spanned the miles and touched my heart dear friend. Bless you for your support and friendship.

Tracey
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5 posted 2002-05-20 01:13 AM


I think you’ve put into words how many of us here feel Lorie. I know you’ve penned my feelings…far better than I could have done.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2002-05-20 01:57 AM


Such a graceful beautiful poem. Thanks, for helping so many of us who are struggling with words today.
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