Open Poetry #20 |
Lacking the Words (for Larry) |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If only I could find the words to comfort you in your sorrow I would pen them with tenderness so that I might reach you. If only I could absorb your pain and ease your burden instead I weep uncontrollably feeling your loss as if it were my own. Lacking in my attempt to console you your sadness is felt across the miles in each and every heart that you've touched and I want so much to give you something back. If only I could find the words.... I hope that you know and can hear my prayers for the flame burns eternally lit long ago by our daughter a special kind of love that glows in your eyes... Forever and always held dear~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very poignant write |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I very much enjoyed this Lori. And I just realized something strange. Not only is your name the same name as my girlfriend BUT both your and my initials are BS! I'm sure Larry will love this poem. Ah know ah did. She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-20-2002 12:50 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
wonderful thoughts and a nice gesture |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Your message spanned the miles and touched my heart dear friend. Bless you for your support and friendship. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think you’ve put into words how many of us here feel Lorie. I know you’ve penned my feelings…far better than I could have done. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such a graceful beautiful poem. Thanks, for helping so many of us who are struggling with words today. |
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