navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Dream of Our Life
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic Dream of Our Life Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-05-19 09:15 PM


Dream of Our Life

your voice echoes throughout me, making my world stop still
your soul wrapped around me, helped my broken heart to heal
blackened skies had gathered around me, the rain was about to pour down
then upon hearing an angel calling, i slowly turned around

there you were, your smile making way for the sky so blue
i fell into your arms and thus I fell in love with you
the breeze somehow became warmer, as I felt your love washing over my soul
in that moment of divine fate, we became as one, and I finally became whole

your hand fits perfectly into mine, the stars shine above us just for you and me
only when we're together darling, do we both feel this complete and free
the world stops for a moment as we share love's beautiful kiss
and I know in my heart, love doesn't get any better than this

when the day is over, you're still the one i hold tight
in the morning i look over and i see your sweet face shining in pure sunlight
our eyes meet...we both smile and I thank God for the miracle of you
We sigh together...as the dream of our lives comes true



"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (05-19-2002 09:21 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2002-05-19 09:26 PM


Amy darling lil sis Oh my I’m  breathless with wonder this is simply gorgeous. YOU do KNOW I simply LOVE your writing don’t you?

I can actually feel the depth of this, this is utterly utterly wonderful. Truly awesome writing you are always a fabulous writer. Utterly utterly exquisite, writing, lovely flow, perfect rhyme I love it. Such a rendering of your hearts song in this delight darling heart it is exquisite. You shine with wonder and light in this jewel.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-05-19 10:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you and your love forever share a life of happiness together and have your dream together come true and last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Dream of Our Life

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary