Open Poetry #20 |
Dream of Our Life |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Dream of Our Life your voice echoes throughout me, making my world stop still your soul wrapped around me, helped my broken heart to heal blackened skies had gathered around me, the rain was about to pour down then upon hearing an angel calling, i slowly turned around there you were, your smile making way for the sky so blue i fell into your arms and thus I fell in love with you the breeze somehow became warmer, as I felt your love washing over my soul in that moment of divine fate, we became as one, and I finally became whole your hand fits perfectly into mine, the stars shine above us just for you and me only when we're together darling, do we both feel this complete and free the world stops for a moment as we share love's beautiful kiss and I know in my heart, love doesn't get any better than this when the day is over, you're still the one i hold tight in the morning i look over and i see your sweet face shining in pure sunlight our eyes meet...we both smile and I thank God for the miracle of you We sigh together...as the dream of our lives comes true "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (05-19-2002 09:21 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis Oh my I’m breathless with wonder this is simply gorgeous. YOU do KNOW I simply LOVE your writing don’t you? I can actually feel the depth of this, this is utterly utterly wonderful. Truly awesome writing you are always a fabulous writer. Utterly utterly exquisite, writing, lovely flow, perfect rhyme I love it. Such a rendering of your hearts song in this delight darling heart it is exquisite. You shine with wonder and light in this jewel. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you and your love forever share a life of happiness together and have your dream together come true and last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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