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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California 
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No more memories left behind, For you to disregard, No more photos of your son, Or poems that show my scars. No more laughter fills the house, Or footsteps on the floor, No more bedtime stories, This isnt our home anymore. No more smiles on wedding day, Starring back at you, No more guilt you found in me, Or egoes left to soothe. No more family dinners, Or nights spent alone, No more tears to wipe away, When daddy wont come home. No more ignorance inside, For living here with you, I'm gone now and you know it, But there is one thing you can do...... No more lying to yourself, By saying that you love me, No more crying on the phone, For a son that you dont see. No more excuses as to why, We weren't good enough, No more promises that you'll try, Becuase you dont know how to love. No more guilt to throw around, As to why this didn't work, No more feeling sorry, I know you to well....... to let this hurt. [This message has been edited by ambermize (05-19-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This was an emotional heavyweight -- but are y' missin' a line? Only askin' 'cause all the other stanzas are four lines, and this one's three, and ends with a comma... She said burn ... together. |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Yeah, I got it now  so much for stumbling out of bed on a Sunday and rushing to the computer ah?? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetAmberGal~ Sometimes a broken relationship leaves memories to remind us of the things we are perhaps better off without ... you will go on, sweetie ... you are strong and that strength will carry you through to a chance at a lasting, loving relationship~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Thanks bsquirrel, becoming quite a reader of me latley huh? always appreciate your words.... Marge, So good to hear from you again.....been there through the ups and down for what now the last four years? who would've thought it would end up this way huh? *sending my love* (and pictures of the baby) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm sooo glad you've got perspective now sis...this is good stuff... And I know this has made you stronger than ever before... Love you Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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