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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-05-20 03:45 PM

                     Between desire and the pain,
                     between the visions and the truth,
                     were precious hours undiscovered
                     within the passion of our youth

                     But there inside our skin of flame,
                     were drops of dew we would reveal
                     to cool our burning drought of love
                     like summer rain on golden fields

                     Into our fantasy's so blind
                     the winds of swaying love did blow
                     and all our gaurded walls were stormed
                     as side by side we shared our souls

                     And when our fortress fears did fall
                     We felt the afterglow of trust
                     that once skipped by our lonely world
                     on tears of sorrow made from lust.

                     Now like the moonlight fashions dreams
                     the fire of romance fills our breath
                     and the winds of swaying love they blow
                     across forever through our breast.

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-05-20 03:48 PM

It is so good to see you posting again...thank you for this...you know it's going in a safe spot....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-05-20 03:50 PM

ETHome~
I really enjoyed this ... and am thankful that the winds blew you our way~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-20 03:52 PM

                     "Now like the moonlight fashions dreams
                     the fire of romance fills our breath
                     and the winds of swaying love they blow
                     across forever through our breast."

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I wish for the winds of love to forever grace your heart and sing to you with loves happiness! (big hugggsssss) May Mr. Bluebird always chant in your heart with joys symphony, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-05-20 04:59 PM

Thanks Karilea for reading and for the comfort of the coming home feeling! Also for the save!

Marge...You know I'm always so pleased to blow in and say a small piece and even more pleased to hear from you!

Thank you Noah you're a very kind and gentle young man. I appreciate your comments!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-05-20 07:43 PM

Appreciate your comments on my writes and would like to say it's a pleasure to read you again..keep it up

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-05-20 07:51 PM

Hello Eric

Your words were filled with so much beauty and passion that was so much enjoyed by this reader.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2002-05-20 07:56 PM

Sigh...you know sweet poet man...you always know

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-05-20 09:03 PM

Eric...this is a true of love...beautifully written!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2002-05-20 09:11 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read this ecrivan, much appreciated!!

Sue I'm glad you were able to enjoy thanks so much!

Paula I know you know I always know so therefore I know you know how much I thank you!

Martie thanks for reading and the play on words!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2002-05-20 10:25 PM

I love it when the cool refreshing winds of Love find there way to me. Thanks, Eric this is really beautiful. My favorite lines:

"And when our fortress fears did fall
We felt the afterglow of trust
that once skipped by our lonely world
on tears of sorrow made from lust"

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2002-05-21 03:44 AM

Hey Midnitesun I thank you for the kind comments they're much appreciated!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2002-05-21 09:12 AM

                     Into our fantasy's so blind
                     the winds of swaying love did blow
                     and all our gaurded walls were stormed
                     as side by side we shared our souls

                     And when our fortress fears did fall
                     We felt the afterglow of trust
                     that once skipped by our lonely world
                     on tears of sorrow made from lust.

                     Now like the moonlight fashions dreams
                     the fire of romance fills our breath
                     and the winds of swaying love they blow
                     across forever through our breast.
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I dont know which is more impressive in this piece...the imagery...the harmony of your cadence, or the soulful express of the emotions.
What I do know is, its alway very very cool to read your rhymes.
Always a treat when you stop in E-babes.

How long can a girl be haunted by you ...
Soon I'll grow up and I wont even flinch at your name.

Alanis Morissette

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

13 posted 2002-05-21 11:59 AM

Thank you Janet you're always so kind. What a great friend you've become since I first came to Passions about two years ago......I appreciate your comments very much!!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

14 posted 2002-05-21 02:02 PM

eric...
this is such a tender write...im moved
more than i can say...the beauty and
wondeful emotion from your heart is
such a pleasure and joy to read...so nice
to see you again. please take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2002-05-21 04:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

16 posted 2002-05-21 05:33 PM

Thank you so much Amy and James for taking the time to read this and comment.
Amy I'm pleased that you found it to be a tender write..........I'll be looking for you!

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