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Tell me there was a time...
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Tell me there was a time... |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Just to be held, Is this too much; A face to be cradeled, & eyes to touch; Lips to taste, A hand to set free; Let me go, Then dream of me. Tell me there was a time- When we were written in the stars... Tell me our time was timless- & that our hearts were intertwined Catch your breath, To open your eyes; & listen to my heart, That your words have despised; Graze my lips, While You walk with me; Remember that place, Which will forever be; Tell me there was a time- When we were written in the stars... Tell me our time was timless- & that our hearts were intertwined |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
a heart warming poem, brought a tear to my eye, i know what you mean |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
This sounds....musical. "written in the stars". I like that much. Peace to you! ~Sydney McLean |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A quietly sad entrance into the World of Passions in Poetry. Welcome! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!!! I hope to read more from you. And I hope you will take some time and get to know us - we're a crazy bunch sometimes, but likeable!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh Rayne, this is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, this is such a touching and compassionate debut; you are never alone, for we all here share these feelings you do and we are here together to share them all with you! (big hugggsssssss) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Rayne you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Us...a crazy bunch???? Surely you will never think something as absurd and silly as that....HEHEHEHEHE! Seriously...a sad but soft and flowing poem. A very nice entrance into our place...we welcome you to Passions... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Welcome. Yr never gonna leave! At least, I hope not.  I love your poetry and yr name.She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Welcome to Passions! A beautiful first post! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidSummerRain~ Welcome to Passions circle of poets and friends~ 'Tell me there was a time-' What a lovely inspirational thought~ Enjoy your stay with us ... we have so much to share in friendship~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Wonderful First Post! I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
You humble me...all of you; I will enjoy my stay yet! The strands in your eyes |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Lost in the twilight impending sunset never born an entity trapped by the very timeless stars you walk beneath gazing skyward I am reminded only of all that became disbelief in stunning reds and blues blinded by that which was I reel only to know all and ever are forever yet bleed the sky crimson therein knowing such never change only sightless life in memories of what should be the simplest yet always most difficult wandering to impossible dreams in this corporeal trap we agree to call real such is reality under a blood red sky so is tomorrow and its legacy to dream only of that which might should was the only reality May your thoughtways lead to azure skies Many thanks for the insight rest to know somethings never die Good luck and of course merci for the sharing EH |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
very well done. . . speaking to the heart. . .and from the soul. . . welcome. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beauitful, heart touching first post MIsummerRain...Welcome to Passions! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
quite a nice starry write |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was beautiful...you have a lovely name too might i add...wonderful write. welcome to passions..you're gonna love it here...much love and friendship within these pages of blue. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely. Welcome to passions. I understand this feeling, a wistful touch, almost. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to this magical land where words flow in every possible direction, all around the seas. I enjoyed this poem. "A face to be cradeled, & eyes to touch; Lips to taste, A hand to set free; Let me go, Then dream of me." I especially liked that part. |
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