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long last love |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
Why do you say I’m jaded? Eyes covered with a scarlet cloth? Why do you think I’m drifting? When I’m here standing next to you? Why don't you say you love me? The way you once did? Why am I so alone when I’m with you? Why do I cry when you leave? Why do I cry when you stay? What have you done to me? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Are you getting any answers? Sounds like someone is getting close to your inner being. Welcome to Passions! |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
you are very intune with my wrighting, this was my first post, thank you for being so kind! |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
"Long Last Love" should be your "Long Lost Love" if they make you feel that way. Imagery, with the 'scarlet' cloth. Interesting. Welcome to PiP fellow newbie! ~Sydney McLean |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, where some of your questions may  or may not be answered! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!Karilea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
IKNAP Welcome, all good questions and I hope you find the answers. Enjoyed the read. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. If you get the answers, write them in a poem, I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very well done first post! I look for ward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I think we can all ask ourselves these questions just because we fear losing love we hold so dearly, sweet friend, this is a powerful first post! (big hugggsssssss) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow! A ton of thoughts and all so very real. Love can be so many different emotions, sometimes clashing with each other.... You will find your answers....time will give you what you are looking for... Welcome to Passions.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooh. I liked yr sparsity of line and color here. Welcome! She said burn ... together. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IKNAP~ Welcome to Passions ! Hope to see more from you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If you two stick together you will get answers...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
IKNAP...Commendable first post. Left me thinking of all the questions that love lost leaves behind. ***Ivy Rose |
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