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Open Poetry #20

Because I love you

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-05-19 02:08 AM

I asked myself Why
do you make me feel this way

Why do I think of you
every minute of the day

Why does my heart ache
when we are apart

Why do I want you
to hold onto my heart

Why am I scared
of what I feel inside

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

IKNAP
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 47
Torrington, Connecticut

1 posted 2002-05-19 02:58 AM

your poem reminds me of one of my own, very good

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

2 posted 2002-05-19 04:27 AM

"Why", that is the question, and a good broth on which to build a poetic writing. Very nicely done. I love your "signature" type-art. Very cute. Peace to you!

~Sydney McLean

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