Open Poetry #20 |
Storybook Romance |
CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
This is where my heart begins, loving you all over again. Or maybe in this little pit, my love for you never quit. I'm not quite sure why I still had faith. I thought for sure you would be my fate. I still stand tall as time stands still. I pray this time I wont be killed. I hold my breath and watch your eyes. You don't look at me...which I depise. Don't give up now, give me a chance or our love will always be a storybook romance. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
yep it sounds like a faerie tale romance alright. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope you get that chance or like you said it will be just a story book romance...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, and I too wish this happiness to come true for you and for all your love to be a fairy tale come to life, sweet friend, this is beautifully bittersweet, we all love you so much! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I enjoyed the read....hope it works out well and the picture in the future is bringht! |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Each love story is a faery tale romance and your's is special! I liked the bittersweet touch to it. Too much perfection leaves no place for appreciation! Neha And yes, keep writing! |
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