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CowgirlFreedom17
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since 2002-05-20
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0 posted 2002-05-20 10:15 AM



This is where my heart begins, loving you all over again.
Or maybe in this little pit, my love for you never quit.
I'm not quite sure why I still had faith.
I thought for sure you would be my fate.
I still stand tall as time stands still.
I pray this time I wont be killed.
I hold my breath and watch your eyes.
You don't look at me...which I depise.
Don't give up now, give me a chance
or our love will always be a storybook romance.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

© Copyright 2002 Melissa Calvert - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-05-20 10:27 AM


yep it sounds like a faerie tale romance alright.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-20 04:34 PM


Hope you get that chance or like you said it will be just a story book romance...James
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3 posted 2002-05-20 04:40 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, and I too wish this happiness to come true for you and for all your love to be a fairy tale come to life, sweet friend, this is beautifully bittersweet, we all love you so much! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2002-05-20 04:48 PM


I enjoyed the read....hope it works out well and the picture in the future is bringht!
Spirit Of Twilight
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since 2002-01-11
Posts 116
India
5 posted 2002-05-20 05:02 PM


Each love story is a faery tale romance and your's is special! I liked the bittersweet touch to it. Too much perfection leaves no place for appreciation!
Neha

And yes, keep writing!

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