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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-16 09:36 PM


Nothing

In the beginning she held onto me so tight
that I thought she would never let me go.

In the end she simply relaxed her grip
like I was someone she didn't want to know.

It was as if someone had allowed her
to come out and play for awhile
and suddenly in a change of heart
it was no longer allowed.

And in the place
of her smiling face
there was nothing left
except empty space.

JamesLee
May16
2002

I was just thinking of
a past relationship...
I am still with
Hey Jin...


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-05-16 09:41 PM


Oh James...thank goodness this was in the past....
and you are still with Jin.
Great write though...very well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-05-16 09:42 PM


Wow James,  this has to be one of your
better writes....You said it very well.
Thank you..

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-16 09:42 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I'm so happy this is about a past relationship, sweet friend, it too saddens me when someone feels there was nothing between ones heart and ones loves heart and leaves like that! (sigh) May you and Jin always find true loves happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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