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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-16 05:22 PM

Yours Alone

I have no voice in this my life,
no choice in loss of it this way.
It pains me deep, for I can't say
those three words, of want today.

Only whispers pass these lips
and even those cannot be heard.
And so I must adore you in
the promise of my rhyming word.

I love to say the love you words
but if in silence I must do,
into these eyes you can be drawn
and see the truth, my love for you.

It undermines my daily tasks
and overrides each waking thought.
I have no voice but need no sounds
as lips express the feelings sought.

Tomorrow is another day,
I'll kiss this night in shadows wake.
My voice will whisper lovingly,
"These lips are yours, alone, to take."

*s
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

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1 posted 2002-05-16 05:33 PM

A nice whispered prayer that reminds me of Prince's Joy in Repetition. SEA might know what I'm talking about. Then again, do *I* know what I'm talking about?

hmm......

Always enjoy yr thoughts, Maureen.

Mikeyguy

She said burn ... together.
-TON

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-05-16 05:39 PM

Mikeyguy *s I have laryngitis from the coughing I have been doing, so any man
would probably be thrilled to be in my company ...so quiet I have to be...for now at least

thanks lots
M

bsquirrel

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3 posted 2002-05-16 05:41 PM

Then I guess it's only fair I be quiet too.

whooooooosh!

blah blah blah blah blah!

thunk thunk thunk thuuump!

HI THERE!

*CCCOOOOOUGH*

Oh right, quiet....

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-05-16 05:52 PM

Maureen darling girl, I could say that this was good but it’s not…… it’s utterly utterly wonderful.

Tomorrow is another day,
I'll kiss this night in shadows wake.
My voice will whisper lovingly,
"These lips are yours, alone, to take."

These lines are utterly utterly exquisite I love the flow of this divine poem well done darling girl very very well done. You know I love this utterly don’t you? Good I do

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-05-16 05:54 PM

well if you can't behave...then just "BE" I always say..

HEY YOU........ could you hear that from here..I tried to say it as loud as I could *s...but only the hey you escaped..you just don't know what you are missing when you can't hear this voice...

* now where was that lusted smilie

oh shoot that said dusted didn't it
M

bsquirrel

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6 posted 2002-05-16 05:56 PM

Hey, we can't exchange dustings! I'm too old for you.

Feel better, Maureen.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-05-16 05:56 PM

Well Marsha..we both love the feel from lips...*s

who can resist..
thanks
M

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-05-16 06:13 PM

about that age thing... hmmmmm...

thanks for the feel better, I am working on it..
M

bsquirrel

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9 posted 2002-05-16 06:34 PM

What? Yr over 25?!

It's obvious by the picture yr not a day over 22!

Much love to y'. Sorry about all th' dust.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-05-16 07:00 PM

the picture is honest and new and face untouched, but try doubling your numbers..at least *s.
M
You know you keep bumping me up and ouch

it's beginning to hurt...

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-16-2002 07:03 PM).]

bsquirrel

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11 posted 2002-05-16 07:04 PM

Ah yes, poets are good at math... so, 26?

The silliness continues

She said burn ... together.
-TON

And as for the bumping -- take lots of aspirin. (and profuse apologies

)

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-16-2002 07:09 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-05-16 07:50 PM

Its too bad that none of those samples worked, Maureen...but at least you didn't have to pay for them.

I remember one time I had laryngitis...and my mother said that my family must be very happy about that because they'd finally get some peace and quiet. LOL but she really meant it!

I really loved your poem and hope you feel better soon.

~healing hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2002-05-16 08:07 PM

Lyra, considering when I was in elementary school and they wrote in my autograph book in 3rd grade,
Roses are red
clover is green,
your mouth runs
like a sewing machine..you can imagine everyone around me is very happy *s

thanks for the hugs, and the samples may work..they just need more time..the laryngitis started before I went to the Drs..

M

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