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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-16 08:41 AM



Dark Eyes

there is light
behind his
dark eyes
dances words
between lines
within whispers
is touch
and fire
where smoke
is surrendered
creating poetry
from sighs

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-16 09:34 AM


1 slick lady
you make mystery
with your words
enjoyed this view

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-05-16 02:10 PM


Very interesting write.  A different look from you.  
I loved it

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3 posted 2002-05-16 02:23 PM


Sensual and beautiful, lahk you.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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4 posted 2002-05-16 02:31 PM


*s  I like it..yes, I do

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5 posted 2002-05-16 03:52 PM


a wonderful picture you paint here helen. . .

I like it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 2002-05-16 05:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always paint such passionate beauty! (kiss on cheek) May you always find that flame burn with faith in his eyes, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-05-16 06:46 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2002-05-16 07:42 PM


Helen - Mmmmm....I like this...very seductive. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2002-05-16 09:15 PM


Helen,  I must agree that this is different
from your norm,  but very good....
mysteriously seductive!!

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10 posted 2002-05-16 09:36 PM


Helen, I just wanted to say....

I LOVE THIS!!!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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11 posted 2002-05-17 03:47 AM


I know I'm a newbie but I just read 20 of your Poems... All very interesting...You are one complicated lady.

I have to agree with your other admirers however, this one seems...Inspired?

AKA
Nvr2BFree

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