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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-04-10 06:35 PM

In depth of mind and soul that cries
‘gainst whispered thoughts in silken lies
From thence the tongue does smoothly speak
of moments strong in beauty seek.

Does not the heart of man beat sure
from chosen love seen flawless, pure
When waves of flush do take the skin
in surge of lust from deep within

Were not the veil of sheer and light
to guard within from eyes of sight
the quiver of heart’s strongest beat
in passions fire the flames then heat.

Winds blown softly in ear’s desire
in tunes to match the lover’s lyre.
As souls caressed by finger’s graze
awaken shiver’s sighs in sways.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-04-10 06:39 PM

Winds blown softly in ear’s desire
in tunes to match the lover’s lyre.
As souls caressed by finger’s graze
awaken shiver’s sighs in sways.
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*SIGH* Oh YES!! Love this Barry!
This style is YOU!
This is you at your finest.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-10 06:42 PM

(smiles) This is a wonderfully passionate poem, sweet friend, this too made my heart shiver imagining being with my dream girl! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-04-10 06:44 PM

Does not the heart of man beat sure
from chosen love seen flawless, pure
When waves of flush do take the skin
in surge of lust from deep within

MMMMMM...love this Barry...written with fleshtone ink

~Victoria

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-04-10 06:44 PM

Magnus,
You are getting better and better, enjoyed.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-04-10 06:47 PM

Magnus darling boy, Oh my word, this is utterly gorgeous, HALT! Stop right there, is it legal to have poetry this spectacular and wonderful? I think I shall have to protest this is just too perfectly divine darling boy, absolutely wonderful. There’s only one way for you to escape sentencing form the poetry police, and that’s to agree to write all my poems too. Well, why not? It seems a very reasonable request to me No one would mind darling boy honestly. Well, I wouldn’t anyway.

As you know this nonsense is meant to distract from the fact this is an utterly excellent poem and I love it love it love it. Pure poetry
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-04-10 06:52 PM

Nancy.....I felt the shudder of the sigh
all the way down here....silly girl!

Noah....yes,  glad you liked it..

Seymour...we are trying, yes we are...Thankx

Vic...hummmmmm, thought you might like this
one...

Mushy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  You silly girl...
OK,  I will write it for you,  if you insist!
Thank You!!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-04-10 07:11 PM

Dang....where ARE the words when I need them?

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2002-04-10 07:47 PM

Hello Barry

So much talent and so much beauty I see through your words. This was lovely.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-04-10 07:54 PM

Wonderful Barry, I love the last verse, Great writing, enjoyed reading it so much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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