Open Poetry #20 |
Private Dance [an old favorite] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Private Dance He is waiting to read this, she knows he is…. like a private letter, between them…. he in her world, she in his… and he makes her want to be his private dancer… in remote chance remoter still the dance but still, for the romance she takes that stance he'll stand the chance and they to take the private dance that one that won't e'er be seen he'll call upon her in midnight dream she'll float to him on wings unseen to hold, then be held in grace, be graced she to smile into his face he to grasp her warm embrace he to take her up by small of back and she to feel his shift and tact his essence she breathes in her perfume, a transient sin her dress of roses pink in glow in sheerest silk her skin does show and length of limb to hip to shoulder keeps the room from getting colder and he in turn, in turn of crest has worn in dream his very best her hand lies there upon his chest in silent beat of love's caress in silence he reads of this, her dream in close of eyes, then it seems she's come to him, again, in romance to take up this, this private dance she'll take the stance he'll stand the chance for this one, most private, dance 01.27.01 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely dream, a lovely write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! This is a powerful, intimate vision of pure love, sweet friend, and may he always be lost in her world and she in his forever and ever in tango! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I am so happy you re-posted this classic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I can see why this would be a favourite! Great imagery, dances sensually down the page. Thanks for the repost... Glad I didn't miss this one! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ...I am enjoying this poem a lot....Glad you put this beauty back up where we could all share it....very softly passionate and a dance in itself! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
hmmmmm so so lovely. floria Floria |
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