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Muys
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0 posted 2002-05-15 04:23 PM



As we lost everything during War, I had to take a job
I got me a pedicure/beautyparlour, no need for me to sob
One day there came a customer, he signed up for a pedicure
After treatement he said to me "My groin aches me for sure"
He asked me if I was willing, to massage softly that spot
But I looked into his eyes and said "No Sir, that I will not"
"My treatment will go no further and at your knees I'll stop
The man was disappointed and then left my beauty shop
In evening when my husband came, I told him the whole story
He started grinning softly and whispered into my ear
"Well that depends from wich point, you start the treatment, dear"
I saw a smile from ear to ear when I looked up to his face
Never did it occur to me that he had a point there in this case
When I think back to this poor man, who sought erotic treatment
I still can see his disappointment, when out the shop he went


Titia helped me to put this true story into rhyme


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[This message has been edited by Muys (05-15-2002 04:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-15 04:27 PM


Oh, I love this, Muys!!! *G* Looking at things from another point of view certainly left more options, didn't it? *G*

You told this so well... Thanks for the grins! *S*

P.S. I love your pic! *S*

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2 posted 2002-05-15 04:30 PM



You had a Very smart husband!

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3 posted 2002-05-15 04:36 PM


Muys!  This is so cute!
And it's a true story as well....
Very well done and enjoyed much.
~Hugs~

Muys
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4 posted 2002-05-15 05:29 PM


Thank you dear Titia for all what you do for me  
When I think about this face off the man i can't
stop with laughing.

Thanks my friends for your reply's
I love you all
Muys

[This message has been edited by Muys (05-16-2002 01:47 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-05-15 07:36 PM


What a refreshing way you have to tell a story, muys! This is delightful...and I wouldn't have a lot of sympathy for the fellow trying to get eroticism from a pedicurist. He sounds like a heel to me!

Keep sharing these wonderful stories with us

Big knuffels to you

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6 posted 2002-05-15 08:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute and well-written, sweet friedn, I am delighted Titia helped you rhyme this, for both you and her share a true mastery of poetic beauty and we're all so blessed to have you share! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Muys, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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7 posted 2002-05-15 08:49 PM


Muys - sweet lady dear, thankyou for the smiles to-day, I really needed them. Chris

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8 posted 2002-05-16 01:08 AM


Thanks for sharing this with us, Muys
It was absolutely delightful...
but, in order to get at his groin from the other end, he would have had to stand on his head....unless he was lying down...

I love the cute story poem.
~lots of hugs

Lyra

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