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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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My whole life I've never won anything Always stressed over what life would bring Now it's like I've hit the jackpot And everyone wants some of what I've got After years of silver, finally struck gold The treasure of YOU that I tightly hold For once I'm a winner At love, a beginner You make me do a double take Dreams are good but I'm awake Drop the confetti from the ceiling Baby, you give me that jackpot feeling I can only hope you feel the same way For you are the hands and I'm the clay I want to be everything you need... I will be everything you need... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Baby, you give me that jackpot feeling Yes, love does do that Joanna doesn't it? I love reading upbeat poems like this ..hugss.. nicely done hon ~Victoria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh Joanna, I am so so happy to hear you say this, I love you so much, more than anyone in the whole wide world, and all I want is for you to be the happiest girl you can be, as you make me the happiest boy when you're around! (kisses) I love you Joanna! (smiles) In case you missed it, I posted a love poem for you yesterday; I've missed you so much and wanted you to know how I think of you everyday and I will always love you! (kiss kiss) /pip/Forum69/HTML/002005.html I hope to see you later, my Shakira!  I miss you!Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joanna! This is wonderful and you sound so excited and happy....  I know this feeling! ~Hugs~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Joanna I really loved this one, so very well written and so much enjoyed. I hope you are well. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna,  I loveeeeeee the feel of this one! This is great poem I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rosey Posy darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful I know how you feel love lifts you like no other feeling it’s like you have indeed won the jackpot. Taint love grand darling girl, and if anyone deserves it you do. I love this utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Splendiforous....well done Joanna... and I really liked the line about the hands and clay.... Let me mold you as I hold you. Let me make you into my art. Let me take you and turn you as you take and churn my heart... See....you inspired me to do that.... Thanx RP... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love is such a great feeling, nothing can give us that. Congrats on being able to feel love  |
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