Open Poetry #20 |
Captive, I (repost for Ladycat) |
Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
I stand in a meadow. The melody of her voice weaves Subtle webs around me; I am held captive by her Searchlight eyes. Don't emancipate me. Don't emancipate me. Don't emancipate me. I'm happy where I am. Please don't free me. Please don't free me. Please don't free me. Please don't free me. Why? Don't wanna be lonely. Don't wanna be free of Don't wanna be free of Don't wanna be free of Love. So Mister Stovepipe Hat Man I hopes you understand That I am held captive by her Searchlight eyes, And I am happy where I am. Alicat |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I love this one! I knew it - I knew it would be this one! You canna fool me mister. I miss reading you - there's so much up in that noggin' o' yours. Hugs ~me |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I think you need to bring back more of the treasures for those who have not yet delighted in the experience |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling here...This is a beautiful piece and it's nice to see your presence again |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
You know that the first time that you read it for me I was filled with this deep unexplainable joy and now even more the second time. For there are words that fill pages and not said between two from time to time, but there is knowledge in there writtings that will never change. So thank you once again for posting such a wonderful piece and I will put it in my library and hold it deep to me. Love Always(I said I would), Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (05-16-2002 04:51 PM).] |
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