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tornapart New Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 6 |
I wonder, if I lie inside you spread my hands and feet Taking over your very being, ever so slowly So that it’s me and not you any more, covering every inch My soul and yer body Would I be able to see the world like u see it? When I have been longing for it. And if I touch the things around u, your hands, my wishes Will I be able to feel like u do? Touch the way u do Through yer eyes will the colors of the world become brighter Will darkness die down if I share yer light with u? Will I be able to hear the things u do? That soft melodious music that u talk about and I fail to hear When all i hear is deafening silence and threats of death And I wonder if lie inside ya, will u notice me (for once) Will I know whats inside yer mind? Would I be able to talk the way u do To weave around this magic u so often do Will I be able to control u? To make you know me Making u bend at my every whim, every need If I lie inside and so close to your heart Will the sweet blood flow inside my veins too Will I become as wonderful and as cruel? Will yer beauty reflect in me? Will u be able to understand my truths? If I lie inside u Will u finally say those things not said? The words that I so want to hear Will I be able to make u speak? Your thoughts and mine together, learning each other Will heaven be found and will hell ever burn away in its own fire So close to you as close as I can get Will u teach me your games? The secrets that u have Will I be able to know and understand? And still fight for u, making you fight for me I wonder…. If I lie inside u. But the question is… will you EVER take me in? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Welcome to Passions! Thoroughly enjoyed your first post!! Bravo! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!!! I would really like to see you spelled out in this instead of the 'internet' version u. Otherwise it's a grand entrance.  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is beautiful! Welcome to Passions! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. I'm with DeVine on the you vs u business. I found it a distraction. Interesting thoughts here, as to whether or not you could somehow 'control' the other person's interactions with the real you if you indeed took over his/her body. Welcome to these forums. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ha! Obviously these fellow forum members have never listened to Prince! I really, really liked this. U do what u want. B true 2 yrself. (okay THAT's annoying -- but I ain't Prince)Loved this. Hope t' see more. She said burn ... together. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
welcome to poetry land. I just know you will love it around here, there are so many good poems to read and get inspired by enjoy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome To Passions! Very interesting first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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