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Open Poetry #20

Let me in

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-05-15 01:26 AM

I love your fragile skin.
Why won't you let me in?

I love your so sad eyes.
Why won't you let me cry?

I love your fragile wing.
Why won't you let me sing?

I love your broken heart.
Why won't you let me start?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-05-15 01:40 AM

awww love can be that way.....hard to understand....peace...

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-05-15 03:35 AM

I don't have any answers to suggest but the questions are good ones!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-05-15 03:38 AM

OMG, that sounds like something someone once said to me!!! (only you put it more beautifully)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-05-15 06:16 AM

Like this...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-05-15 06:37 AM

are you ready?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-05-15 12:49 PM

Nah, i's not s' simple as a first blush of love poem. This one's inspired by m' girl, who, under times of great duress and need, will occasion herself t' inflict bodily harm on her person. By the roundabout way ah said that, y' can tell ah wish i' wasn't true. I love her, but sometahms, I can do nothin' for her. :p

Thanks for listenin' to mah rant.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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