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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-15 01:26 AM


I love your fragile skin.
Why won't you let me in?

I love your so sad eyes.
Why won't you let me cry?

I love your fragile wing.
Why won't you let me sing?

I love your broken heart.
Why won't you let me start?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2002-05-15 01:40 AM


awww love can be that way.....hard to understand....peace...

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

ethome
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2 posted 2002-05-15 03:35 AM


I don't have any answers to suggest but the questions are good ones!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2002-05-15 03:38 AM


OMG, that sounds like something someone once said to me!!! (only you put it more beautifully)
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-15 06:16 AM


Like this...James
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-05-15 06:37 AM


are you ready?

  

M

bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-05-15 12:49 PM


Nah, i's not s' simple as a first blush of love poem. This one's inspired by m' girl, who, under times of great duress and need, will occasion herself t' inflict bodily harm on her person. By the roundabout way ah said that, y' can tell ah wish i' wasn't true. I love her, but sometahms, I can do nothin' for her. :p

Thanks for listenin' to mah rant.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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