Open Poetry #20 |
Heart Beating |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“HEART BEATING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ My heart is a fragile one, and it aches with thoughts of you not yet found… In my dreams I search for a gentle woman to embrace, sharing this passion of romance within… Place your head to my chest, as I gently place my touch to your silken hair; listen to this soft heart beating, as it reaches out to you… ~~~~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! I love this bill..your words are melting upon these blue pages like chocolate syrup in the sun..mmmmm hugs ~Victoria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, i too believe there is no feeling more happier than the beat of a lovers heart against ones own heart, I dream ever so much of feeling my Joannas heart beating to mine! (big hugggsssss) May you always share this happiness with your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Soft, romantic...as you do so well... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Victoria's reply! This is truly beautiful Bill. If I were closer I would indeed place my head on your chest... if just to hear.. the beat of your romantic heart. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is Utterly utterly fabulous writing darling heart, I love it. This is so beautiful, the words trickling over the page like water flows over the beach. Absolutely excellent writing, I am awed by this wonder. It is absolutely fabulous. I could feel the sigh and the love swelling up, covering the heart with wonder Outstanding writing darling girl outstanding Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, A good write, enjoyed the read. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wonderful Bill, for every man there is a woman and I hope you find her. She will be lucky. floria Floria |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Seek and ye shall find..."... so it's said.. Oh, romantic one.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know BC, you've got to stop reading minds around here. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
omg....my heart is beating...it just melt with your words. Swooning ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful feelings shared...one of my favorites...James |
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