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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-05-14 10:22 PM


I move closer towards your love
With every breath that I take
My love growing ever stronger
With ever move that I make

You fill up all my senses
And hold the key to my heart
There is no amount of distance
That could keep our souls apart

I feel your warmth from the sun
And feel your touch in the breeze
Loving you is never a chore
For I love you with such ease

We'll watch the sun disappear
And simply fade from our view
As my words paint a perfect picture
Of blissful days spent loving you

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-14 10:26 PM


And I thought I was a died in the wool
romantic....I think I found someone else who
is as well......Three guesses,  first two
don't count....

YOU GOT IT!

Sue...you are it...

Lovely poem...as you always can do so well..

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-14 10:41 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you always write the most enchanting love poetry, sweet friend, I hope you are saving all of these for your love to forever hold true to his heart! (kiss on cheek) You are a true romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-15 06:51 PM


Sue:  Another romantic and beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-05-15 06:53 PM


enjoyed
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