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Folding The Cards Of Love Dealt
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Folding The Cards Of Love Dealt |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Shall feel the moment of a touch when a soft kiss grazes within the dreams of lover’s clutch as trail of fingers traces Find the beating heart of a chest the throb of crimson flow Fuel the hot flame of sultry crest as lovers feel the glow Does the instance of one’s embrace bring of the soul the fire Will the quiet of time erase heat of passion’s desire Can one’s core retain love given as countless days go by where emptiness does now live in the blindness of the eye. Where once the course of heart was felt from treasured moments past a pair of hearts the cards once dealt hand folding......the deal passed. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry You weave such magic with your marvellous words of love and romance. I hang off every word you write and only wish I had time to read them all. This was so tender and overflowing with all things romantic. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Well done I enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah yes! Yet another great write from the King of Romance! Love it Barry, ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (05-14-2002 10:38 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy you are a weaver of stars incandescent dreams WOW this is utterly utterly perfect you’ve written an absolutely fabulous poem here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhyme absolutely divine. This is I think one of your utter utter best. You are always an excellent writer this is utterly utterly superb. Exceptional writing of amazing beauty and such sadness, I know exactly where this is flowing from, I feel it the well spring within too. You really are the absolute crème de la crème Truly excellent writing, I love it utterly utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ you paint romance with such beauty and grace...always a pleasure to read you....  hugsssLauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional. Sometimes there is love without a prayer in the cards...but there is love. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you truly are a king of romance and your quill always recites with such classic voice and muse! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm wondering just what would happen if I held out for an inside straight. . . great work my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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