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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-05-13 09:48 PM



Storm in waves
rides red clay.
Turbulence
in shades of gray.

A patient slave--
blue sky awaits.
Stand your ground.
Pray for grace.


*my humble offering* tsk.

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-05-13 09:51 PM


Sold to the highest bidder....One nicely
written humble offering!!

Nice write K...

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2 posted 2002-05-13 09:51 PM


Karen~!!!!!

It's amazing.....and  think I know the pic....LOL or did you combine two??? (lol don't tell just yet) WOW lady, challenge very well met!! thank you....hugsssss
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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3 posted 2002-05-13 09:54 PM


*hanging my head and wishing I'd have come up with that line*

Turbulence
in shades of gray.

Just stunning Karen.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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4 posted 2002-05-14 01:08 PM


I will visit upon you one shower of rain. (Edward Gorey paraphrase)

Just imagine instead of balloons, those are hailstones!

Uh......

Enjoyed!!!!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 2002-05-15 03:53 PM


pray for grace. . .

hmmmmmmmm. . . I like that one the best. . .

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