Storm (in waves) for greeneyes

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Open Poetry #20

Storm (in waves) for greeneyes

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-05-13 09:48 PM

Storm in waves
rides red clay.
Turbulence
in shades of gray.

A patient slave--
blue sky awaits.
Stand your ground.
Pray for grace.

*my humble offering* tsk.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-05-13 09:51 PM

Sold to the highest bidder....One nicely
written humble offering!!

Nice write K...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-05-13 09:51 PM

Karen~!!!!!

It's amazing.....and think I know the pic....LOL or did you combine two??? (lol don't tell just yet) WOW lady, challenge very well met!! thank you....hugsssss
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-05-13 09:54 PM

*hanging my head and wishing I'd have come up with that line*

Turbulence
in shades of gray.

Just stunning Karen.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-14 01:08 PM

I will visit upon you one shower of rain. (Edward Gorey paraphrase)

Just imagine instead of balloons, those are hailstones!

Uh......

Enjoyed!!!!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-05-15 03:53 PM

pray for grace. . .

hmmmmmmmm. . . I like that one the best. . .

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