In Response To LadyChip's Fine "Poetry"

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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-05-14 05:59 PM

How 'bout them pome writers
Ain't they fine?
Puttin' down thoughts
Makin' them rhyme

Them dadburn poet types
Showin' they skill
some use computers
Others usin' quills

Talkin' bout love
Talkin' bout sorrow
writin' it now
Readin' it tomorrow

Them everlovin' poet writers
Ain't they neat?
Writin' them words
With rhythm and beat

Wanna write a ditty?
If ya get the notion
Putit inta words
get your pen in motion

Wanna be a poet?
Don't need a ticket
Find some words that rhyme
And getchyaself to do it!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-05-14 06:12 PM

not quite as soft as Mme Chipmunks but a poem just the same
*s
M

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-05-14 06:23 PM

Toe, I read yours first, hers second; she win's but you come in by a [ahem] Toe...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-05-14 09:49 PM

Wanna be a poet?
Don't need a ticket
Find some words that rhyme
And getchyaself to do it!

Hey there Mr.Toe...I am really flattered by your pome!
cept...there aint no rhyme in it!

Of course, mine's better...but I really do like yours too!

~dizzying hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-05-14 09:54 PM

Awww, Toe

You can rhyme, anytime
as for me..let me be free!

Hey! This was cute, especially since it made Lyra smile!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-05-14 10:12 PM

HAH! Easy for you to say, there are stories in here about my rhyming abilities, so I guess what I have been missing is the ticket then! Cute ditty, and yup it rhymed alrighty!

Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start!

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-05-14 10:56 PM

LOL! @ Madame C!!! Very observant, lady.

Get yourself some words that rhyme...you mean like "ticket" and "do it"? ROTFLMAO!!!

Forget Yogiisms..we got Toeisms!

Nobody writes 'em like you, Toe

thank God!

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2002-05-15 07:17 AM

Ticket? Do it?.....I guess I shouldda said, Balladeer, wanna be a nose picker? Don't need a ticket, just stick your fanger in it, and pickit?.....LOL

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2002-05-15 09:13 AM

I innocently leave for the day, thinking sweet Toe has gone away... Next morn I find he's writing verse to Madame in response to hers? Too bad that smiles aren't legal tender... for what a wealth our Toe does render. *S*

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2002-05-15 09:16 AM

By the way.... you could always rhyme ticket telling Deer where to stick it? LOL

I enjoyed this very much, Toe... now I'm off to read the inspiration for this fine ditty! *G*

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