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Mother_Earth
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0 posted 2002-05-14 03:56 PM


It's lost I can't find
Gone for sure this time
Or old like vintage wine
Maybe hiden behind a blind
It was here at nine
And it was so prime
I knew it was all mine
Its really one of a kind
In front and behind
And how it could shine
Did it cross the line
Get caught on a vine
Gosh I hate to whine
I'm going into a decline
Can anyone help me find
My hardly used mind?


Just one of those days

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-05-14 04:12 PM


I would help,  BUT.....

I have to find mine first....

I do know this feeling....some days are
like that....

Welcome back,  have not seen you in a while..

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-05-14 04:15 PM


Welcome back, Mother Earth...it seems like its been a long time since you last graced these pages...

I agree with Barry...I'd love to help, but my mind would have to be engaged first...and right now, I don't even have a clue as to where to find the stupid thing!

~welcome back hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mother_Earth
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3 posted 2002-05-14 08:36 PM


Magnus, I was sure Someone would know where it is!  Good to be back.

Madame Chipmunk, boy are a lot of us in a mess....I think...if I had my mind.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 2002-05-14 08:46 PM


If I could find mine....well I think it's safer where it is...where ever that may be

Love you my mom~

tracie66
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5 posted 2002-05-15 01:41 AM


Hi
Great write and I love the last line
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my hardly used mind?
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well done
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Duncan
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6 posted 2002-05-15 01:49 AM


Maybe it's havin' a couple rum and cokes with mine!
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7 posted 2002-05-15 12:52 PM


Well, if it's any consolation, I can attest that you don't really need one... I'm blonde and I KNOW! LOL

I liked this very much, ME... hope your day got better!

kaile
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8 posted 2002-05-15 01:22 PM


sorry about that but i am having a fine time reading your rhymes
Sven
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9 posted 2002-05-15 03:38 PM


hey. . . I know those kinds of days. . .

I've found that the mind is always behind the fridge. . .

nice work. . .and nice to see you back. . .

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Mother_Earth
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10 posted 2002-05-15 07:59 PM


ButterfliesDC, what a great way to get out of looking.  Love 'ya my kid

tracie66, thanks and it is little used.

Duncan, I like that!!  And who cares where it is, right?

suthern, I was blond (and a lot of other colors) but now very gray.  This day was good after I quit looking.

faterider, thanks

Sven, behind the fridge?  No not there either.  Good to be back

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-05-15 08:36 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friedn, your monorhyme made me smile all the way throughout, I too know that feeling when all my muse is under rug swept and I'm trying to find it beneath the crawlspace, this is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all lover you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mother Earth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mother_Earth
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12 posted 2002-05-15 11:21 PM


Thank you, Noah, for you kind words.  It was a fun-write.
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