Open Poetry #20 |
Mind |
Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
It's lost I can't find Gone for sure this time Or old like vintage wine Maybe hiden behind a blind It was here at nine And it was so prime I knew it was all mine Its really one of a kind In front and behind And how it could shine Did it cross the line Get caught on a vine Gosh I hate to whine I'm going into a decline Can anyone help me find My hardly used mind? Just one of those days |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I would help, BUT..... I have to find mine first.... I do know this feeling....some days are like that.... Welcome back, have not seen you in a while.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Welcome back, Mother Earth...it seems like its been a long time since you last graced these pages... I agree with Barry...I'd love to help, but my mind would have to be engaged first...and right now, I don't even have a clue as to where to find the stupid thing! ~welcome back hugs Lyra |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Magnus, I was sure Someone would know where it is! Good to be back. Madame Chipmunk, boy are a lot of us in a mess....I think...if I had my mind. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
If I could find mine....well I think it's safer where it is...where ever that may be Love you my mom~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Great write and I love the last line ========================== my hardly used mind? ========================== well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Maybe it's havin' a couple rum and cokes with mine! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well, if it's any consolation, I can attest that you don't really need one... I'm blonde and I KNOW! LOL I liked this very much, ME... hope your day got better! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sorry about that but i am having a fine time reading your rhymes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . I know those kinds of days. . . I've found that the mind is always behind the fridge. . . nice work. . .and nice to see you back. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
ButterfliesDC, what a great way to get out of looking. Love 'ya my kid tracie66, thanks and it is little used. Duncan, I like that!! And who cares where it is, right? suthern, I was blond (and a lot of other colors) but now very gray. This day was good after I quit looking. faterider, thanks Sven, behind the fridge? No not there either. Good to be back |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friedn, your monorhyme made me smile all the way throughout, I too know that feeling when all my muse is under rug swept and I'm trying to find it beneath the crawlspace, this is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all lover you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mother Earth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you, Noah, for you kind words. It was a fun-write. |
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