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Another Alive |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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She had calmly collected cruel intentions and the uselessness of avoidance was akin to sand grains trying to avoid the slow insistent pull of hungry waves. Whether by instant gratification or the slow deterioration those sand grains will always find their doom in the come hither arms of a seductive sea. This begins the renewed story of Black Lace Coming soon, to a poem near you. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Whether by instant gratification or the slow deterioration those sand grains will always find their doom Sadly, that is the way of it.... I've seen that movie one too many times. I wouldn't have wanted to miss your poem but I think I'll pass on side show. Loved your ending~ |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Hey...I've heard of her before. *grins* Hi Jenn, glad to see you bringing her back out of hiding. (Though I'll be alone in hiding now) hehe |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
cool. . . I love a good story. . .and I have a feeling that this one will be pretty good. . . *Sven puts his own candle next to the one lit by Destiny's Charm. . . * ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There's always a story to be told. Let's hear it. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I echo the last two comments!! |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Great poem, I enjoyed it! Your work has always inspired me to keep on writing! I look forward to your next! Snow (Michell) "Day and night, one in the same, Darkness is my Destiny." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Oh Jenn, this is sooooo funny and clever, sweet friend, hey, I want reservations now now now, I want to see the special screening before this poems actual release date! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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