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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-05-13 10:49 PM

She had calmly collected cruel intentions
and the uselessness of avoidance
was akin to sand grains
trying to avoid the slow insistent pull
of hungry waves.
Whether by instant gratification
or the slow deterioration
those sand grains will always find their doom
in the come hither arms of a seductive sea.
This begins the renewed story of Black Lace
Coming soon, to a poem near you.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-05-13 11:14 PM

Whether by instant gratification
or the slow deterioration
those sand grains will always find their doom

Sadly, that is the way of it....
I've seen that movie one too many times.
I wouldn't have wanted to miss your poem
but I think I'll pass on side show.

Loved your ending~

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2002-05-14 12:25 PM

Hey...I've heard of her before. *grins*

Hi Jenn, glad to see you bringing her back out of hiding. (Though I'll be alone in hiding now) hehe

DestinysCharm
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

3 posted 2002-05-14 04:27 PM

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-05-14 04:30 PM

cool. . . I love a good story. . .and I have a feeling that this one will be pretty good. . .

*Sven puts his own candle next to the one lit by Destiny's Charm. . . *

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

5 posted 2002-05-15 04:06 AM

There's always a story to be told. Let's hear it.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2002-05-15 06:04 AM

I echo the last two comments!!

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-05-15 09:14 PM

Great poem, I enjoyed it!
Your work has always inspired me to keep on writing!
I look forward to your next!
Snow
(Michell)

"Day and night, one in the same, Darkness is my Destiny."

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-05-15 09:30 PM

(giggles in delight) Oh Jenn, this is sooooo funny and clever, sweet friend, hey, I want reservations now now now, I want to see the special screening before this poems actual release date! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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