Open Poetry #20 |
Together |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Together I once thought I knew everything there was to know about true love Seems to me I didn't know a thing till you were sent to me from up above Love was something I only dreamt of, now I hold it in my hand Somehow by an Angels mercy, you made me understand Looking into your eyes, I feel myself drifting lost but not alone Inside your heart, I know I have a home People may talk, let them, they don't know what it's like between you and me Your love unlocked the chains around my heart, finally setting me free You've taught me the meaning of what real love is My heart is wrapped up in the magic of your kiss Everyday we're together, I realise your my soulmate That this love between us is destined by Fate Now I know what love is, I feel it when we touch Amazes me time and time again though that I could love someone so much Your eyes lock with mine, as I feel our souls dance I realise that you and I have been given a golden chance When the world turns against us, and you feel like giving in Remember the love we share, let it burn within The rain may pour down, but together we are safe from harm Just find shelter from the storm in my loving arms We can't deny these feelings, we both know it's true You love me and with my whole heart I love you Baby...just go with the love we share...feel it with you soul Let it wash over you...together we will become whole "you can't stop |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very beautiful love poem, Amy...it really grabbed me. ~sweet hugs Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and are filled with such sweet romance! (kiss on cheek) may you and your love forever be together in happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster Well done this is a keeper. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart, This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder. I should have known when the sunlight came stroking my face with it’s golden light that this morning was going to hold a special treat, and of course it did. Do I love this? Yes you know I do Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Cirrus Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 55 |
Beautiful Miss Amy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly and beautifully penned Amy. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
She said burn ... together. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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