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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-05-14 08:02 AM

Inspired by Micheal:

Your Tick is my Tick

We are but a tick of a clock.
A grain of sand in rhyme
A moment of humanity
Within the human time

We are something and nothing,
A bee within a hive
And but for the tiniest trick
We know that were alive.

Weather you think glad or
Ill is nothing to the mill.
For change is our eternity
And forever is the spill.

We are a part of all that is
And is, will turn to was.
In the blink of an eyelid and
The only answer is because.

So dream my friend I beg of you
Since change is ever toward the new.

Balladeer

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1 posted 2002-05-14 08:08 AM

Amelican svine! Don't you know ve have vays of making you tock!?

Nan

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2 posted 2002-05-14 08:25 AM

Don't you be trying to make Sy tock... I'd much rather see him just keep on ticking...

Mistletoe Angel

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3 posted 2002-05-14 08:42 AM

(sigh) Yes, I think we all have evolved from the earliest times so we have a piece of everyone within us and we change so quickly so it is safe to say there will always be a change around the bend but yet, I always wonder also what will be conserved? (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-05-14 08:45 AM

We are a part of all that is
And is, will turn to was.
In the blink of an eyelid and
The only answer is because.

So dream my friend I beg of you
Since change is ever toward the new.
==========================

and your wink .. is my *winkie*

and your rhymes ... my sublime

WAAAAAY cool me stinkylove ...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-05-14 09:33 AM

Balladeer,
Funny my original title was "Your Tick is my Tock." LOL

Nan,
Thank you sweet.

Noah,
Nothing is conserved, everything changes. Thank you.

JM,
So how about a cool raspbery tea. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2002-05-14 09:34 AM

A tick, a moment caught in time
A word, a poem, lost in rhyme
The wisdom from fair poet's heart
On pages blue to us impart
And from the screen to world outside
Two poets stood there side by side
As time stood still, then froze in place
And hugged as they met face to face

...missing those hugs Sy,wonderful poem and give Isabelle my love and best regards

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-05-14 09:45 AM

Seymour darling boy this is utterly utterly excellent, I can really relate to this today. Time is flowing through my soul in a stream and I feel as if I’ve caught in it’s tide and can’t slow its pace. Yes I know that we can’t and to think we control time is an illusion but one I was happy with

Your writing is always exceptionally well presented and written in this case it is utterly utterly superb. I love this darling boy it is truly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (05-14-2002 10:16 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-05-14 10:07 AM

Ruth,
A hug from you just makes my day. I hope you are well and getting some good news for a change.

Marsha,
Although you write the same, my comments seem to be a little different.

Sunshine

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9 posted 2002-05-14 10:29 AM

Don't you just appreciate
the poets that make us great?
The ones that leave inspire
through their poetic pen's perspire

Me? I'm thankful just to read
my bit of Sy that suits my need...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-05-14 10:59 AM

Sunshine,
And you are all the sunshine I need,

Martie

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11 posted 2002-05-14 11:29 AM

Sy

"So dream my friend I beg of you
Since change is ever toward the new."

Yes!

Krawdad
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12 posted 2002-05-14 12:02 PM

Aw shucks, I thought this was going to be about sharing wood ticks! Disappointment!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-05-14 02:43 PM

Martie,
Thank you sweet.

Krawdad,
Sorry I didn't mention them.

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

14 posted 2002-05-14 05:09 PM

We are something and nothing,
A bee within a hive
And but for the tiniest trick
We know that were alive.

Thanks for sharing this with us, Sy...
I really enjoyed it.

~hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-05-14 05:32 PM

Lyra,
It's always a pleasure to read your comments.

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2002-05-14 10:32 PM

Don't you worry Sy dear,
I'll protect your tock.
If Balladeer threatens you
I'll just "clean his clock!"

I'll do anything for you,
just ask any old time.
I want your ticker tocking,
so we get our daily rhyme!

Dang, I know it doesn't rhyme but
I'm starving LOL. Loved this poem Sy.

Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2002-05-14 10:36 PM

Sharon,
You are a love and my tick will always tock for you.

passing shadows
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18 posted 2002-05-15 03:12 AM

"nothing to the mill"....always loved that. This is deep, really a thinker.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

19 posted 2002-05-15 03:25 AM

Nicely done Seymour! But it really just, ticks me on!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

20 posted 2002-05-15 07:34 AM

passing shadows
As long as it's a thinker and not a stinker.

ethome,
Did I tickle your tick? LOL

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

21 posted 2002-05-15 01:03 PM

When I saw the title and that Balladeer had inspired it, my thought was "A good bug man should be able to get rid of EVERYONE's ticks! LOL) But at last my mind did click...
You're talking of another tick! *G*

This is great, Seymour... very thought-provoking. *S* I enjoyed it very much.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

22 posted 2002-05-15 01:08 PM

Suthern,
Yes dear girl it was about the other Michael.
Thank you for the extra bump. You are a love.

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