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Themes based on Greeneyes challenge
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Themes based on Greeneyes challenge |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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Maker Ancient as the land Reared up with massive head A sand worm on Dune Majestic Golden sun explodes Bathing the sharp mountain tooth And cloud choked valley Cheshire moon Peeking from the clouds What heavenly merriment What is his secret Dust storm Bearing down on me A churning wall of dense doom Blotting out the sun Sky eye Deep blue break in the clouds The bright patch of sun on the snow Spring is comming soon You will have to go to the challenge section to see the pictures that inspired these themes.I hope you like them Greeneyes. [This message has been edited by paladin (05-13-2002 10:03 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah this is a wonderful answer to the challenge. So mystical. Well done! Like a red brick, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Paladin, this made me smile. ...much like the cat.  Well done and challenge met. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I sort of feel the same way about YOU now! Delightful--I saw the sky grinnin' too! But alas, I simply considered it proof that the Gods are laughing at me! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
paladin~ What an enchanting piece.....challenge met very nicely sir....thank you... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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