Upside-Down In Poetic Plummet

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-05-19 05:34 PM

Upside-down In Poetic Plummet
~*Marge Tindal*~

I chase a thought close to the edge of creativity
begging it to jump ...
sometimes it does ...
landing
n
w
o
d
-
e
d
i
s
p
u
in a puddle of ink
that bleeds blue over the edge
of my pages of sanity~
Then again ...
perhaps it just seems that way to me~

*Thanks to Doreen for the inspiration for this one~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-19 05:42 PM

Oh believe me, I know this feeling well.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-05-19 06:40 PM

OH gosh.....here I am chuckling over this
one.... You are tooooo much.....

Thank You Marge...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-05-19 06:49 PM

Marge,
this was smooth, almost diving instead of jumping.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-05-19 07:17 PM

Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. I love the thought of this, I really love it when you play with your poetic think in ink. Beautifully done darling heart uttely perfect

You knew I’d love this didn’t you ……. Utterly utterly excellent writing and of course I love it utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-05-19 07:26 PM

Wow...for a minute, I thought that you had typed those letters upside down!

I had to go back and look at it, because I wondered how you got your keyboard to do that.

This was so creative and well done!

~ upside down hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2002-05-19 07:26 PM

Well, that's about how I feel tonight, but that might well be the wine I've been drinking. LOL

Hugs to you sweetie

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-19 07:26 PM

Very creative Marge!
Enjoyed the plunge.

Sort of like bungie jumping.
~Hugs~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2002-05-20 09:24 AM

You're gonna insist that I expand my exceedingly linear horizons, aren't you? LOL Okay... now that you've gotten me all twisted up, I'll untangle long enough to tell you I enjoyed this very much... and hope you keep chasing those thoughts. *S*

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze