Open Poetry #20 |
He loves me, he loves me not |
Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
I'm counting the buttons on my blouse, He loves me, He loves me not, He loves me, He loves me not, He loves me, He loves me not, And then I panic, There's one button missing. Quickly I look in the sewing basket, I'm nervous, I turn the whole thing over on the table. Thank God, it's there. With careful stitches I put it back in place And start counting again. Yes, no, yes, no, yes, no, YES!!! I'm running to my Mom, Grab her around the waist, While shouting: "Mom, he loves me!" Astounded she asks: "Who darling?" But I'm already dancing out of the room. He loves me, me, me, ME!!! I was fourteen. Life on the internet begins at...90! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Clapping wildly!!! FANTASTIC!!!!!! and what an image, I saw----running to the sewing basket.....Priceless.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Too cute! Loved this! *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was just too cute for words! I remember doing that myself a long time ago. We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (05-13-2002 01:07 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ha ha ha ha! I loved that. And the ending is so perfectly stated -- "I was fourteen." Big smiles over here in California. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful and cute, sweet friend, I could envision the sweet innocent girl you were back then and that little girl still smiles and sings in your heart today everyday! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is adorable, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Muys, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Muys, Life...as it should be! Great story. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...good thing you found that button...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is adorable, Muys...I remember doing this with a daisy when I was about that age. ~loving hugs Lyra |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a beautiful tale, Muys! First love - can there be any feeling like it? I think not.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I remember doing this, too. Only I did it with a daisy. |
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