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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-05-12 10:39 PM


A spell has been cast
On this heart of mine
It started with just a kiss
Your sweet lips were so divine

You weaved your special magic
And soon you had me in a trance
You filled my heart with wonder
And soon my soul began to dance

You made me feel invincible
My spirit soaring way up high
From here I could see forever
As I flew with the birds in the sky

You sprinkled me with moondust
And my face was all aglow
How you captured my attention
And through my veins your love flowed

Now you have me at your mercy
For your love is all I need
Your spell will never be broken
For I will follow wherever you lead

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-12 10:45 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your wonderful words always shine with such romance and laughter and fill me with hope that maybe, just maybe someday I can hold my true love that I dream ever so much of close to my heart and we can be under a magic spell to make me and Joannas dream come true forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-12 10:55 PM


Sue...you won't follow...you will walk side
by side, hand in hand....as you should...
and you will...

Another lovely piece of your very loving
and romantic words...  Well done...

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-05-13 12:12 PM


oh my, this is sooo pretty and it makes me think of someone who is special to me!
Enjoyed it thoroughly my friend

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-13 05:27 AM


Yes it can start with a kiss...James
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