Open Poetry #20 |
Mountain Falls And Crystal Streams |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
First star till morning he whispered Then.....onward to the Milky Way I woke up, smiled and remembered A dream, just a dream, I would say. Where is this land within my dreams that comes on a breeze in the night where waterfalls fall to clear streams in mountains high of a dream’s sight As maidens dance, laugh and play among the ferns and evergreens while unicorns prance in display on dancing hooves in shining sheen Birds warbling a high flying song as distant sun now sets to moon Starlit skies twinkle the night long as elves play a harmonic tune Dreams take me to the make believe to swim the falls of crystal streams till morning’s star tugs on a sleeve while fairies fly and night owl screams |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the imagery in your words, sweet friend, this is wonderful and whispers with the stars and the streams! (big hugggssssss) May all your wildest dreams come true always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a beautiful dream, Barry... quite a shame to wake up from that one! ~dreamy hugs Lyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry I have so many favourite poems of yours but this would have to come close to being the best. What a wonderful journey I made through your dreams and visions as I found myself floating on air. This was an exceptional piece of writing! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I qualify this as "Dreamy Poetry" Mag---makes me WANT to go to bed early... a lovely and delicate weave of dream! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Dreams take me to the make believe to swim the falls of crystal streams till morning’s star tugs on a sleeve while fairies fly and night owl screams" I hope you know I'm keeping this! The whole poem is wonderful, but I had to highlight this one part. It's exquisite, dreamy stuff!Thanks, as I'm sure you wrote this one just for me. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lots of lovely images to dream about tonight barry..nicely done hugsss... ~Victoria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ Can I borrow that dream?? very lovely, I enjoy your words much...hugssss Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Back for another dream cycle, and to put this into my library. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is excellent writing Magnus...for sure...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. Your writing is always special, sometime it is especially so, and this is an absolute beauty. The light within streams out to caress the eye and heart of the reader. Truly this is one of your best. I love it utterly utterly love it. You really do write the most beautiful heart caresses you know? And this is exquisite. A keeper for sure. Thank you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, I came, I saw, I read and enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a dream? maybe...maybe not |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, I see the shadows have been passing through PiP once again....causing me to be flattered AGAIN!!!! Thank You, thank you , thhaaaaannnnnnk you. South of Dixie we are.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry A lovely poem is sometimes born in the same place dreams are born. I think this is true of this one. Beautiful! |
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