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Macha
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since 2002-05-12
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0 posted 2002-05-12 07:32 PM


When I disappear,
(As I will surely do)
Would they sense the loss?
Would anyone be be blue?

I would hardly be missed
In my circle of none.
I do not have a "circle."
I am the only one.

What does it matter, anyway?
My children would remember me.
They would remember how I loved them.
They would remember their mommy.

Lay your head down...
For the last time.

© Copyright 2002 Macha - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-12 07:36 PM




(smiles) Oh yes, yes, they will always love you so much, for you are their hero and I know they will grow up with golden hearts filled with love just like yours! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, HAPPY MOTHERS DAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Macha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-12 07:45 PM


Nice mother-y verse.
kaile
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3 posted 2002-05-13 12:52 PM


Hi Macha,
welcome to passions...

sometimes, i get frustrated as it seems that my mother's life only evolves around her children..but i can't help feeling touched at the same time...the amount of sacrifices she must have made for us...tender write that jogs my memory banks here

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2002-05-13 01:01 PM


Very touching, Macha, You'll find that the love of your children will prove to be the greatest treasures in life...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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