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Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2002-05-12 05:25 PM

If I told you I was sorry would you believe me
Would you see past the facade that I throw out for the world
Could you handle life hand in hand with me
Walk a mile with me
Could you understand
Understand the things that make me weak and
get me down
Would you take the time to feel the rain pouring down in your head
Take time and know how it cleanse me
I want to stand my ground and not be pushed away
Could I be the one
Would I be the one
Have you looked deep into and behind my eyes
What about into my heart
Do you know me
Do you even know what you want
Will you tell me
Sometimes I sit and think about all the things I coulda said
I shoulda said
All the shoulda, coulda, wouldas won't change things
People, places, or time
If I told you I was sorry now would you believe me
Even if I said I know what I want
And where I want to be
Would you hold my hand and walk with me for a day
Just one
See me as I see me
And see you through my loving eyes
Could you dare to be everything
Everything I ever wanted and needed in life
I know I'm asking too much
I know that I don't want you to change
But if you do
I'll be here
Right here waiting for you
If I told you I was sorry could you believe me
How about I just tell you that I love you instead

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

[This message has been edited by Ladycat (05-13-2002 09:41 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-05-12 05:57 PM

And if he loves you he will bathe in these words...James

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-05-12 08:07 PM

Ladycat darling girl OH my word this is excellent writing, what can I say darling heart your writing shines through every single word. You’ve always written well, often excellently right now you are simply soaring.

You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling girl utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly