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Open Poetry #20
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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-05-12 04:23 PM


At Winter's passing,
June spreads dewy wings over
A waking seashore

Why do the plaintive
Cries of many Loons, leave me
So empty at dawn?

Night sky star-dappled
Radiant light images
Reflections of God
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-05-12 04:35 PM

Ivy Rose,
Three wonderful haiku, enjoyed.
wiLLow
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2 posted 2002-05-12 04:53 PM

Hi Ivy, these are wonderful, I especially liked the last one
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-12 06:55 PM



(smiles) Oh Ivy, these are wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always have such magic and inspiration in the, this is lovely! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira
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4 posted 2002-05-12 07:59 PM

Ivy Rose darling girl again the pure beauty of your writing awes me with it’s wonder I love it. The sheer joy of this utter delight is magnificent. I love the flow the touch of magic that simply bubbles through these three delights

Utterly utterly beautiful writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79
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5 posted 2002-05-13 12:26 PM

Very peaceful..... hugsss


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.
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6 posted 2002-05-13 03:18 PM

I think the first one is my favorite.
I love them all though. I just wish I could do them as well as this.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-05-13 03:19 PM

Loved yr nature.

She said burn ... together.
-TON
Alan
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8 posted 2002-05-13 09:40 PM

Ivy...I love this. It is gentle and peaceful.
alan
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