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walker
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0 posted 2002-05-12 12:56 PM



It began like a quiet
river feeding my thrist
I waited impatiently
for what was about to come
but never did
I strived so hard
for perfection
until I realized that
it didn't mattered
But now in the arms
of tomorrow
I wait patiently
for what I feel
will happen
Just a figment of time
tells me that it's very near
My heart beats faster
like it never did
I picture this
I picture that
revealing what a
kiss will bring
I feel love near
it caresses my spirit
it blows life back to me
Love is here
finally

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2002-05-12 01:23 PM


Ahhh.....at long last love. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-05-12 01:25 PM


I waited impatiently
for what was about to come
but never did

Want some M&M's while ya wait?  Good one, walker.

Shakira
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3 posted 2002-05-12 01:47 PM


Walker, I love this poem, especially the first 2 lines...they drew me right in to your lovely thoughts.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-12 05:51 PM


Finally...James
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5 posted 2002-05-12 06:59 PM




(smiles) Oh Walker, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy love has found a way to your heart and I wish you this happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-12 07:31 PM


Walker darling heart this is wonderful writing, you never cease to amaze me, without doubt you are a fabulous writer. This is as is usual for you a piece of soul. You know I absolutely love this don’t you. Utterly utterly perfect. How can you write so consistently well  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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