Open Poetry #20 |
Love is here, finally |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It began like a quiet river feeding my thrist I waited impatiently for what was about to come but never did I strived so hard for perfection until I realized that it didn't mattered But now in the arms of tomorrow I wait patiently for what I feel will happen Just a figment of time tells me that it's very near My heart beats faster like it never did I picture this I picture that revealing what a kiss will bring I feel love near it caresses my spirit it blows life back to me Love is here finally |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahhh.....at long last love. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I waited impatiently for what was about to come but never did Want some M&M's while ya wait? Good one, walker. |
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Shakira New Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 9 |
Walker, I love this poem, especially the first 2 lines...they drew me right in to your lovely thoughts. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Finally...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Walker, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy love has found a way to your heart and I wish you this happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Walker darling heart this is wonderful writing, you never cease to amaze me, without doubt you are a fabulous writer. This is as is usual for you a piece of soul. You know I absolutely love this don’t you. Utterly utterly perfect. How can you write so consistently well Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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