Open Poetry #20 |
Mum’s Chickens |
Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Mum’s Chickens Happy Mother’s Day Mummy Mums face when we gave her Those chickens She smiled as she always did Said I love them darlings And none of us knew Not once that they Really scared her silly I didn’t find out until years later None of us did We thought she loved Those chickens As much as she loved us They were the noisiest chickens When they weren’t clucking They were squawking She used to run into the pen Feed them And run out Because they chased her They never gave us any eggs Not once, not one single one Finally after we’d had these Noisy chicken about 6 months Mum asked if we’d mind If she sent them to Live on the farm Which wasn’t far away She promised they would Live happily there And they did Not only that They laid eggs Never stopped laying them Oh yes I remember those Chickens!! Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kissy, A cute and clever write. And a good end, enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very sweet....made me hungry for southern fried chicken.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hai Krissy, Your Mom is a sweetiepie isn't she. Looking forward to see you in Tampa Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, aw, those little rascals, how they always try to trick you when you least expect it with their egg business! (smiles) May you and your mom have the happiest Mother's Day together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh gosh Krissy...Now...you know that I am going to have to write a poem about Mushy's chicken coop or something like that.... Hmmmmmmm, where can I start? Lets seeeee.. Yep, got it...thanx... Mushy, I know you are reading this... So, just sit back darling girl....it won't be tooooo painful for you... Thanx Krissy for that little bit of info! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Krissy this is so cute! You really got me laughin' now! ~Hugs~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, I am giggling inanely here as I used to have chickens so I can relate to your tale. Also my children gave me a suicidal guinea pig for one Mother's Day but that another story entirely. Loved yours to bits. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Krissy, the cutest chick your mother ever had was YOU! and, judging by your poetry, you never lay an egg, either |
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