Open Poetry #20 |
Tranquility of Parenthood |
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Caiya Rhiannon Bustamante Tranquility of Parenthood… Sounds of tiny breath Translucent and soft Piercing mental slumber Echo walls, float off… ~Tranquility~ Fluttering of movement Gentle infinity ‘Cross the room I feel you The smallest part of We… ~Completeness~ By daylight, smiles light my worry Of the way it’s suppose to be I’ve realized you’re good at this I only have to look to see… ~Perfection~ Fingers so miniature reach out To wrap the smallest things Be it hair or animal You’re amazed with “just being”… ~Wonder~ Being soul and center focus We parents have it best I’m told The many hours of laughter Cast from our little eight month old… ~Paternal Admiration~ For Caiya Rhiannon…our epitome of "daughter"… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (05-11-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Happy Mother's Day! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwwwwwwww what a cutie!! Happy Mother's Day Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is SO beautiful!! Happy Mother's Day to you! ~Hugs~ *I have a granddaughter named Rhiannon* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sunshine- Thank you sweetie!!! 'tis my first one and I'm sucking it up!! *G Lauren- ty...beginning to see the benifits to this holiday!!! Enchantress- Oh really!!! My husband and I just LOVED the name...actually came from the song by Stevie Nicks...(you should see the baby dance to it!!) Happy Mother's Day sweets!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Oh there she is.......miss her so much you know. Nice to see you still have time to write about her.....what she's moving now? Kiss that goodbye! love you and miss you both, don't make me cry AGIAN! Your sister, amber |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
She is absolutely gorgeous!! I love the way her smile is reflected in her eyes...you should be very proud of her. And she will be proud of her mommie's poetry...good job!! Happy Mother's Day!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely beautiful, both the poem and your girl! This piece is exceptional Devina! Like a red brick, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute and beautiful, sweet friend, I love how you gave her that beautiful name from a Stevie Nicks song, me and my dream girl Joanna dream of being together in the future and we dream of naming our daughter Shakira, what a coincidence! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You and Caiya, sweet friend, have the happiest Mothers Day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
What a lucky girl! Happy Mother's Day! ~Sydney McLean |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ambs- I know sweetie, I miss my lil nephew terribly too (thank GOD for email) And let me tell you that she is into everything now...I swear, I stop and she runs into me from following too close behind!!! Well YOU KNOW miss mommy!!! Happy Mother's Day sis...I love you!! Sharon- I love that smile myself Lady...she just lights up our days!!! thank you!!! Gentle Spirit-ty so much for the exceptional!!! Noah- quite a coincedence I'd say!! ty for your sweet words... M3M-thank you for that!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a happy kid!...and why not with a mother like you? This is great, Devina! I wish you all the very best! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this! It brought back many memories for me, and a huge smile. Thank you, and well done! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Aaaawww... *sniff sniff* [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-12-2002 01:34 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Deer-so you mean she'll be wierd??? ROFL Thank you with love from the proud mama!! EagleOne-and mine are memories in the making...glad to send some your way!! Mike- no sniffin now...I do have my good days!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
doll baby.... and the kid is cute too enjoyed this lady... some great moments |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
sweet pop-in DS... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, how did I miss this one?? you know that I love it. . . it's so. . . you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
tres cool tanyarita - tell me though... isn't it illegal to put the words "tranquil" and "parenthood" in the same sentence? oh well - i really like your new style a lot! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven- ty my sweet...now you know I'm a proud mommy!!! Chris- you mean you like the brighter side??? and now that she is cutting major teeth...yes, I do believe I've commited some sin with this!! ROFL ty m'friend Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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