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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2002-05-10 11:30 PM



Whistle Stop

out in
the distance
I hear
the sad cry
of a train
I wish
it would
stop for me
for tonight
I know
it’s pain


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-10 11:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, for I can relate this feeling to me so very much too, for when I was a little boy I was hurt all the time and I just wanted my life to end and hope aboard the train and escape! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, time will ease the hurt and love and joy is bound to replace it all, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-10-2002 11:34 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-05-11 01:38 AM


So little written saying so much, well done!

We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start!

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3 posted 2002-05-11 02:02 AM


Me, too...even jumped in front of the tracks, no stopping it tonight.
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4 posted 2002-05-11 02:17 AM


i'm sorry duncan...
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