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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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did you see the rain today and after, the earth spill from river mouths and stream smiles did you see the tree tears when they road leaves like carpets to land softly on grass forests did you see the sun then when she was regal when she wore her warm and bathed in morning did you see my eyes when they touched your charms and my lips when I said that I was looking at heaven and that I saw only you ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"You're in my blood like holy wine you taste so bitter and so sweet-- Oh I could drink a case of you, and still be on my feet.." J. Mitchell  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, I know your love will always be blessed by the love you offer her and together you are bound to find the sun arch above heaven in each others eyes! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweet seren' you are such a thrill to read in reply thank you babe...and hughurts to you noah, thank you my friend..I think we all see the "her" or "him" in this way...at least for moments. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What woman would not want an absolute such as this coming from a man of words and actions... A wonderful way to start any day and better yet, any evening... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger You fumbled the jumble and caused a rumble. Well done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How every woman longs to be loved like this. ...Amazing... ~Morning Hugs to you Dark~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Whyte, will wish we all do love this way and that we just don't say it enough, thanks lady Sy, tumbled into rumbledum did I? Thanks amigo Enchantress..slow hugs ms, and a sincere thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear DS Heart words come so sweet sometimes, they tear the smile This poem is like that. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
when they touched your charms and my lips when I said that I was looking at heaven and that I saw only you" If I knew how to swoon, I'd be doing it right now You have such delicious charm. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks sweet lady, glad you feel the touch smittykitty..you do swoon well...slow hugs in reply |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
To be seen that way, looked at as such, is heaven love. Tender and affectionate in the most exciting way Dark.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My gawd, this is absolutely gorgeous! Usually, I find the word 'sighs' and 'wow' far too overused and insincere. But, you are one heck of a talented poet and you have my sincere sighs and wows! This is a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (05-10-2002 08:26 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Dark, warm and sincere. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy you are a weaver of stars incandescent dreams WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolute diamond here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhythm absolutely divine. I love the image this brings so softly tenderly soft whispered dreams You know I adore this too don’t you, my sweet and dear friend, and do I forgive you for always outshining me? What do you think? Mmmm of course I do, how could I not Truly excellent writing, I love it utterly utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
did you see my eyes when they touched your charms and my lips when I said that I was looking at heaven and that I saw only you Damn. wiwt |
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