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Wayward Winds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Wayward Winds The winds blow fine and salty fresh Lay films of brine upon my flesh. Skies are blue where stars are found and My spirit soars horizon bound. The ship cuts water spume and froth, And I stand groom to all the broth. I feel so free that I could cry, Only wind, water, ship and I. The days are bright, the nights a sight, Speaks magic to me day or night. This gifted freedoms wayward bend, Is the voyeur mist I transcend. The raw and crude set my mood Control broods my only food. The ore and essence of my goal It opens the door to my soul. I sail by skill and will the sea and Laugh and cry with the powers that be. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
OMG, incredible write here!! Just awesome!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Now I thought this was gonna be about Balladeer's farting problem in public, and though it's not, I'm not disappointed, this is fine Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity...  Gotta love those seabound verses, yes? I know I love yours.. Check your email, Sweet Sy - we need to be in touch...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I sail by skill and will the sea and Laugh and cry with the powers that be."  (smiles) Arrrrrr, methinks this is a whale of a fine poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big huggssssss) May you always sail the seas of life and find solace in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful verses I love poems about the sea Typically superb Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This gifted freedoms wayward bend, Is the voyeur mist I transcend. The raw and crude set my mood Control broods my only food. The ore and essence of my goal It opens the door to my soul. I sail by skill and will the sea and Laugh and cry with the powers that be. =========================================== Ahhh my King of Cool and rhymes divine... you sate my crave for cadence with this gem of internal meter and rhyme...as well as paint me a vison of the sea...a dragon ship cutting full steam ahead. very very cool me Stinky-winkie-love.  come sail on me seas, me Popeye-poet  LOL  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Saunni, Sweet comment, thank you. Toe, That would really be a wayward wind. LOL Nan, Thank you sweet, been checking the mail, nothing from you. Did you write me? Noah, That's a whale of a reply, thank you. Elizabeth, A lovely thank you for a lovely lady. Sy JM, Ahoy me beauty would you like to take a sail with me? Winkiewikie Randy Stinky. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour my dearest friend this is utterly utterly wonderful. The feel of the sea spray the taste of the salt on my lips and you steering the ship across oceans of dreams onto morning sunrises that paint the sky in honeyed pinks and glittering gold’s. What more could I ask for darling boy? Nothing this is utterly perfect and of course I utterly utterly love it. As ever you thread the day with beads of wonder and leave it lying there for me to find. I was rather busy this morning but there is always time to drop in and adorn my soul with a Seymour delight. Thank you my dearest friend  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The last two lines summarize my cries and I would sail this ship that flies |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This reminds me of "The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner"... except that I enjoy it more. *S* Of course, I had to memorize Rhyme in high school... my teacher must have been a sadist to not choose a shorter poem. LOL And I'm being SUCH a good girl to not quote parts of it to you... I know I wouldn't forget nearly as much if there wasn't so much useless info hanging around in my head! LOL I like this very much, Seymour... ROFG @ Toe's response! LOL |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ Well now I knew from the title I would LOVE this, yes I love this... GREAT write SYLauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You are always a joy to read. Sunshine, Suthern, THank you for the delightful comment. Lauren, You are a love, thank you. |
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