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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-05-10 05:43 AM

Moonlight pale,
Just a sliver of silver,
O’re dark sail,
Little light
To make travel unravel
In the night.
Starlight weak
Covered by cloud’s thick dark shroud,
Light won’t peek
At so white
Cream colored skin I move in
Out of sight
In a lighter shade of pale.

Gloom
Thanks Mysteria for the song
that inspired

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-05-10 06:03 AM

smiling....that is a favorite...and how don't care if it brands me "old hippy"--in fact? I'm damned proud. BEAUTIFUL.

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2002-05-10 07:43 AM

Professor Gloom,just beautiful! BTW, awesome title!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-05-10 12:33 PM

nicely done, of special meaning to me, this tune has been...

M

Elan
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since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

4 posted 2002-05-10 02:36 PM

Thank Goodness Mysteria gets around, I would not have missed this for anything...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-05-10 03:30 PM

Love this Gloom.
Wonderful.....simply wonderful.
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-10 05:19 PM

(smiles) Say, what is the title of the song that inspired this, I just love this wonderful dazzling canvas you painted and now I am curious in hearing the lovely song that inspired it too! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

7 posted 2002-05-11 03:05 AM

I wondered upon reading the title if Mr. Brooker and his cohorts named "Procol Harum" might be in some way involved in inspiration herein. Twould seem from your remarks tis so. And I agree there are infinite shades of pale.
"You skip the light fandago..."
Much enjoyment at seeing such.

EH

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

8 posted 2002-05-11 03:12 AM

Wonderful poem, I enjoyed very much
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

9 posted 2002-05-11 10:40 AM

good memory, good song. Nicely written Gloom.

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